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There are absences that never flew far away because they are so dear, desired... they are hearts, they are stars that shine suspended in the air, in the vastness of cosmos...!

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Date: 12/29/2024 8:54:00 AM
Nice thought. Maybe consider changing "cosmos" to lovers or dreamers?
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Alkas Poetry
Date: 12/29/2024 12:12:00 PM
dear Chris Conn, i THANK you very much for wtiting, bur i prefer Cosmos...extension of the delirium cosmos, being immense, metaphorically fits into feelings and stars, the concrete and the abstract salute, alkas

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