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Foul Play

One day when a brave dashing young drake, Landed upon a coastal salt lake. He saw a pretty young duck, But, he was way out of luck. For the gorgeous young duck was a fake. Far too late, he found out his mistake, As he started to shiver and shake. When the wildfowler's gun stuck, That left the drake quite dumbstruck. He fell prey to a giant sea snake. 8 / 3 / 2019.

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Date: 9/3/2019 6:18:00 PM
Hello George Seal, what rotten luck. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 8/11/2019 7:36:00 AM
Nicely done, George! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/8/2019 2:11:00 AM
Out of the frying pan into the fire ,the duck ran out of luck lol Congrats on your win George. Tom
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Date: 8/7/2019 10:04:00 PM
George, what a great limerick. If it looks like a duck, and walks like a duck.... Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/7/2019 8:07:00 PM
This one is a fav for me. Nicely penned. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/7/2019 7:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, George. Well done.
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Date: 8/7/2019 6:26:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats George:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2019 5:58:00 PM
George, congratulations on your winning placement, this is very cute and witty!
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Date: 8/3/2019 10:44:00 PM
Agree with Jan, George; witty indeed. Thank you George - Lindsay
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Date: 8/3/2019 7:05:00 PM
Very witty limericks George:-) hugs jan xx
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