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The Night ITQ

awaken dreams night silence screams till madness leaves from mourning trees the sunshine breaths what daylight sees a dawnings tease while lightness flees a moonlight spies thru blinding eyes when dusky cries cause twilight dies across the skies the heart ache flies and where it lies the sun will rise some days in time the planets rhyme then darkness climbs from its sublime the shadows chime and do their mime on daylight's dime like its a crime before the day turned into night the night turned day into the light

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Date: 3/28/2024 10:41:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this Beverly. The internal rhymes make it especially pleasing to read aloud. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/26/2024 9:21:00 PM
Beverly, I apologize for the late judging unfortunately I fell ill. I want to Congratulate you on your 1st place win in my contest. You did this very well. Keep writing my friend. Blessings and hugs.. Charlie
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Date: 3/19/2024 10:49:00 PM
So difficult to pen a quatozian with optimum contrast, especially with the word play of dark and light. A splendid job done with wise sight
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Beverly Robertson
Date: 3/20/2024 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Ms. Kalita, your kind words are very inspiring. I worked very hard on creating this poem and enjoyed how it turned out I was hoping for my first 1st place winner but for some reason it was never judged..Thank you again and Wow, you are an amazing Artisan.

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