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Immortality

Ah, starry flower its gentle Breeze is touched me Enigmatically Cherished music of freedom Ah, immortality a hidden , drop Of the universe A perpetual breath of a rose A thorny joy of twilight A cryptic verdict of the sun A fervent glitter of spring The mysterious greeting of moonlight Life glares at joyous death silently Fathomless tranquility A tremendous scope for death A craggy destiny of eternity... /

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Date: 7/5/2024 1:11:00 PM
Beautiful poetry and a hope for those born again
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 7/5/2024 9:27:00 PM
Hello Tom, thank you Tom. Have a wonderful weekend.
Date: 5/22/2024 3:42:00 PM
Hello Mul, I like the way you did this poem. You speak of the season of spring and the universe. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/31/2024 4:02:00 PM
Hello Mulu, Thank you enkjoy your evening. Blessings. /Darlene/
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 5/31/2024 2:09:00 PM
Hello Darlene,thank you.Have a blessed afternoon.

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