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Unfairness

Ultra-conservative undertaker umpires upperclassmen unit; Unique undergrads used Unceremonious Underhanded unions-- Uncooperative! THIRD PLACE WINNER Written April 30, 2021 for "Pleiades 'U' Contest" sponsored by Kim Merryman

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 11/5/2022 9:37:00 PM

Congratulations on the win, Milt Unfairness, Uncooperative underhanded, Unions, ( more than a little unfair) Loved this verse. Take care, Shirley

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/6/2022 8:32:00 AM

Thank you, Shirley.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2021 4:44:00 AM

Creative winning work. Way to go with this winner. Congrats. Sara

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/18/2021 9:10:00 AM

Thanks, Sara.

Judy Ball

Date: 5/7/2021 5:09:00 PM

Well said my friend. Good job. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 8:07:00 AM

Thanks, Judy. I appreciate you.

Ann Foster

Date: 5/5/2021 2:30:00 PM

Well written. Ann Foster

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 8:07:00 AM

Thanks so much, Ann.

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/4/2021 7:28:00 PM

Great alliteration, Milton! Creative way of showing "unfairness". Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 8:10:00 AM

Thanks so much, Kim. I really enjoy your contests. Sorry I'll probably miss the next one!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/4/2021 4:32:00 PM

Well done. Congrats!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 8:09:00 AM

Thanks, Kim.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/4/2021 8:03:00 AM

This part made me smile "undertaker umpires" Congrats on your win!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 8:09:00 AM

Hey thanks, Caren.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2021 3:32:00 PM

so true Milton, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 8:09:00 AM

Thanks, Jan.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/3/2021 8:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative write with "U." Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a blessed day.............

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 8:09:00 AM

Yep, my brain was kicked into overdrive! Thanks.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/2/2021 9:28:00 AM

Very accurate. The title you have mentioned summarizes your accomplishment nicely; you are truly exceptional in how you use the letter "U. I wish you good luck," I miss your feedback on my work; I hope it's not something you dislike...take care, my friend.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2021 8:08:00 AM

Thanks, Lasaad. I love your work. I'll take special note.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/30/2021 8:39:00 AM

WoW! L. Milton, You described your title very well; you did an amazing job with the letter U. You made it look so easy, I’m finding it quite difficult to write a Pleiades with the letter U. You should do well in the contest . Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/30/2021 9:17:00 AM

Ah, thanks so much, Alexis. Yeah, this one was a bit harder. Good luck. Have a wonderful, window-opening weekend!