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Unfairness

Ultra-conservative
undertaker umpires
upperclassmen unit;
Unique undergrads used
Unceremonious
Underhanded unions--
Uncooperative!

THIRD PLACE WINNER
Written April 30, 2021
for "Pleiades 'U' Contest"
sponsored by Kim Merryman

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Shirley Hawkins

November 5, 2022 at 9:37 PM

Congratulations on the win, Milt Unfairness, Uncooperative underhanded, Unions, ( more than a little unfair) Loved this verse. Take care, Shirley

L Milton Hankins

November 6, 2022 at 8:32 AM

Thank you, Shirley.

Sara Kendrick

May 18, 2021 at 4:44 AM

Creative winning work. Way to go with this winner. Congrats. Sara

L Milton Hankins

May 18, 2021 at 9:10 AM

Thanks, Sara.

Judy Ball

May 7, 2021 at 5:09 PM

Well said my friend. Good job. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB

L Milton Hankins

May 9, 2021 at 8:07 AM

Thanks, Judy. I appreciate you.

Ann Foster

May 5, 2021 at 2:30 PM

Well written. Ann Foster

L Milton Hankins

May 9, 2021 at 8:07 AM

Thanks so much, Ann.

Kim Merryman

May 4, 2021 at 7:28 PM

Great alliteration, Milton! Creative way of showing "unfairness". Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

L Milton Hankins

May 9, 2021 at 8:10 AM

Thanks so much, Kim. I really enjoy your contests. Sorry I'll probably miss the next one!

Kim Rodrigues

May 4, 2021 at 4:32 PM

Well done. Congrats!

L Milton Hankins

May 9, 2021 at 8:09 AM

Thanks, Kim.

Caren Krutsinger

May 4, 2021 at 8:03 AM

This part made me smile "undertaker umpires" Congrats on your win!

L Milton Hankins

May 9, 2021 at 8:09 AM

Hey thanks, Caren.

Jan Allison

May 3, 2021 at 3:32 PM

so true Milton, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

L Milton Hankins

May 9, 2021 at 8:09 AM

Thanks, Jan.

Paula Goldsmith

May 3, 2021 at 8:59 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative write with "U." Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a blessed day.............

L Milton Hankins

May 9, 2021 at 8:09 AM

Yep, my brain was kicked into overdrive! Thanks.

Sotto Poet

May 2, 2021 at 9:28 AM

Very accurate. The title you have mentioned summarizes your accomplishment nicely; you are truly exceptional in how you use the letter "U. I wish you good luck," I miss your feedback on my work; I hope it's not something you dislike...take care, my friend.

L Milton Hankins

May 9, 2021 at 8:08 AM

Thanks, Lasaad. I love your work. I'll take special note.

Alexis Y.

April 30, 2021 at 8:39 AM

WoW! L. Milton, You described your title very well; you did an amazing job with the letter U. You made it look so easy, I’m finding it quite difficult to write a Pleiades with the letter U. You should do well in the contest . Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis

L Milton Hankins

April 30, 2021 at 9:17 AM

Ah, thanks so much, Alexis. Yeah, this one was a bit harder. Good luck. Have a wonderful, window-opening weekend!

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