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What Are They Thinking

People go along with life,striding their own way however,for good,bad or indifferance,this is what i say life is for the living, do not dwell the past treat eachother equally, and shadows do not cast. For people in glass houses, should not be flinging stones nor mocking the afflicted,or bullies breaking bones really,what are they thinking,it really is obsurd my speach it is not fluent, and people finish my words They don`t realise the frustration,how can they possibly it`s every day life for them,i cannot make them see the frustration, a fluent speaker takes for granted twas not my fault, a seed did grow once it was planted. Paul Beadnall Sponsor Natalie Fllikkema Contest Name Cellphones in the sauna...What annoys YOU?

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Date: 8/4/2011 11:07:00 PM
I agree entirely. I have a friend who finishes people's sentences, she does not do it out of rudeness, but she does it to show the person she is listening and thinks she knows what you will say. I will let her read your poem, she may re-think this long-term behaviour. Thank you for your great poem. Lee
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/4/2011 11:21:00 PM
CHEERS Lee, my fiance` does, sometimes,in which i am glad at times when i have had one too many and can`t be bothered explaining my conversation ahahhaha..Only sometimes though .. thanks again for your kind comments ...Blessings Paul
Date: 8/3/2011 10:27:00 PM
I'm hearing you on that last verse Paul. I'm married so I haven't finished a sentence in a spell ! : ) Congrats to you
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/4/2011 6:35:00 AM
Cheers Robert,glad this was of real consiquence to somebody.. blessings,my friend Paul.
Date: 8/3/2011 11:28:00 AM
cool, paul..a rousing applause to you for the shining win! ..:) huggs!
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/3/2011 12:08:00 PM
Thank you very much , Nette for your kind words blessings love Paul
Date: 8/3/2011 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Natalie's contest Paul. Love, Carol
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/3/2011 12:04:00 PM
Thanks very much,Carol.blessings love Paul
Date: 8/3/2011 7:00:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest. cory
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/3/2011 7:25:00 AM
Cheers Cory always appreciated blessings Paul
Date: 8/2/2011 10:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Paul. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/3/2011 7:27:00 AM
Cheers Ralph much appreciated,mate blessings Paul
Date: 8/2/2011 9:40:00 PM
Congrats Paul on a fantastic victory with this dynamo poetry luv..
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/3/2011 7:28:00 AM
Thanks very much Linda-Marie always appreciated .. Blessings Paul
Date: 8/2/2011 9:29:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Natalie ,Paul
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/3/2011 7:30:00 AM
Thanks very much Dr.Ram, Always appreciated blessings Paul
Date: 8/2/2011 8:10:00 PM
Excellent Paul-Congrats. on your win!
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/3/2011 7:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Natalie,enjoyed wrioting for your topic in contest blessings Paul
Date: 7/28/2011 9:21:00 PM
A clever verse with great rhyme and a meaningful message. Nice write.
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 7/29/2011 12:41:00 AM
Thank you very,Elizabeth,positive feedback is always encouraging..Blessings..Paul
Date: 7/26/2011 8:23:00 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Paul. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work. Love, Carol
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 7/26/2011 2:32:00 PM
Thanks very much Carol on your kind words. What is the time differance between you and England. Do you live in USA? Which part ? blessings Paul
Date: 7/25/2011 3:39:00 PM
A lovely thought provoking poem, a worthy entry for the contest. good luck
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/3/2011 7:24:00 AM
Cheers Jodie appreciated blessings Paul.

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