Paul Beadnall Poet Rhyme

What Are They Thinking

People go along with life,striding their own way
                however,for good,bad or indifferance,this is what i say
                  life is for the living, do not dwell the past
                     treat eachother equally, and shadows do not cast.

                        For people in glass houses, should not be flinging stones
                          nor mocking the afflicted,or bullies breaking bones
                            really,what are they thinking,it really is obsurd
                              my speach it is not fluent, and people finish my words

                                 They don`t realise the frustration,how can they possibly
                                    it`s every day life for them,i cannot make them see
                                      the frustration, a fluent speaker takes for granted
                                        twas not my fault, a seed did grow once it was planted.


Paul Beadnall


Sponsor Natalie Fllikkema 
Contest Name Cellphones in the sauna...What annoys YOU?

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Lee Ramage August 4, 2011 at 11:07 PM I agree entirely. I have a friend who finishes people's sentences, she does not do it out of rudeness, but she does it to show the person she is listening and thinks she knows what you will say. I will let her read your poem, she may re-think this long-term behaviour. Thank you for your great poem. Lee Paul Beadnall August 4, 2011 at 11:21 PM CHEERS Lee, my fiance` does, sometimes,in which i am glad at times when i have had one too many and can`t be bothered explaining my conversation ahahhaha..Only sometimes though .. thanks again for your kind comments ...Blessings Paul

Robert A. Dufresne August 3, 2011 at 10:27 PM I'm hearing you on that last verse Paul. I'm married so I haven't finished a sentence in a spell ! : ) Congrats to you Paul Beadnall August 4, 2011 at 6:35 AM Cheers Robert,glad this was of real consiquence to somebody.. blessings,my friend Paul.

Nette Onclaud August 3, 2011 at 11:28 AM cool, paul..a rousing applause to you for the shining win! ..:) huggs! Paul Beadnall August 3, 2011 at 12:08 PM Thank you very much , Nette for your kind words blessings love Paul

Carol Sunshine Brown August 3, 2011 at 7:29 AM Congratulations on your placement in Natalie's contest Paul. Love, Carol Paul Beadnall August 3, 2011 at 12:04 PM Thanks very much,Carol.blessings love Paul

Cory Long August 3, 2011 at 7:00 AM congrats on your win in the contest. cory Paul Beadnall August 3, 2011 at 7:25 AM Cheers Cory always appreciated blessings Paul

Ralph Taylor August 2, 2011 at 10:25 PM Congrats on your win, Paul. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph Paul Beadnall August 3, 2011 at 7:27 AM Cheers Ralph much appreciated,mate blessings Paul

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 2, 2011 at 9:40 PM Congrats Paul on a fantastic victory with this dynamo poetry luv.. Paul Beadnall August 3, 2011 at 7:28 AM Thanks very much Linda-Marie always appreciated .. Blessings Paul

Dr.Ram Mehta August 2, 2011 at 9:29 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Natalie ,Paul Paul Beadnall August 3, 2011 at 7:30 AM Thanks very much Dr.Ram, Always appreciated blessings Paul

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer August 2, 2011 at 8:10 PM Excellent Paul-Congrats. on your win! Paul Beadnall August 3, 2011 at 7:33 AM Thank you very much Natalie,enjoyed wrioting for your topic in contest blessings Paul

Elizabeth Wesley July 28, 2011 at 9:21 PM A clever verse with great rhyme and a meaningful message. Nice write. Paul Beadnall July 29, 2011 at 12:41 AM Thank you very,Elizabeth,positive feedback is always encouraging..Blessings..Paul

Carol Sunshine Brown July 26, 2011 at 8:23 AM It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Paul. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work. Love, Carol Paul Beadnall July 26, 2011 at 2:32 PM Thanks very much Carol on your kind words. What is the time differance between you and England. Do you live in USA? Which part ? blessings Paul

Jodie Williams July 25, 2011 at 3:39 PM A lovely thought provoking poem, a worthy entry for the contest. good luck Paul Beadnall August 3, 2011 at 7:24 AM Cheers Jodie appreciated blessings Paul.