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Destiny

The timid smiling naked butterfly dances. The perfumed Spring walks haughtily. Lilliputian angels gaze at the fiery east with fearful eyes. Maybe our scars will not bleed again.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2024 12:32:00 PM

this is so sweet. I saw only two little punctuation errors. After dances and eyes, you need a period, not comma. then the next sentence starts out capitalized . I will search for a longer poem of yours now to check for you in a Soupmail.

Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 2/27/2024 3:11:00 PM

Hello Andrea, thank you, my Dear friend. Have a blessed afternoon.

David Smith

Date: 9/14/2021 9:23:00 PM

Butterflies are always sign of things in balance. Also frogs croaking as not likely to be plague of insects. Bats are a blessing and curse as on the one hand they take large quantities of harmful insects but on other hand spread disease, but maybe if we keep our distance. Best regards David in NZ

Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 9/27/2021 10:35:00 PM

Thank you,God bless you!