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A Jealous Woman In Love

                               

                                   ~ A Jealous Woman In Love~

             Since I barely slept I felt ill as tears blinded my vision 
                     heart broken burning with desire to see him 
        to hold him to kiss him love him more and show him that strong will 
                     through my eyes to make him understand 
            I am a woman and should not be judged because I am jealous
                  I am a woman deeply in love how can I not be jealous 
          I am jealous of his sheets caressing his body when we share our bed 
         I am jealous of his hair being part of him all day when I am not with him 
                  even his eyes when he sees the moon instead of me 
      I am jealous of his phone feeling his breath or using a knife and fork to eat                    
              as I only wish at the time to feed him and caress his lips
            Oh! I love him so much that I became jealous of his shadow 
         so jealous I drowned in my thoughts like a fish thrown on the shore 
          by the raging waves trying to breath to survive without the oceans 
                                               salty water.
                          

For the contest of Andrea Dietrich
a poem For The Honor Of My FAVE Poetry.
                                                
Therese Bacha  ( Win No.1)
9/4/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/26/2014 1:17:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I do swear I miss you to. I just came in my hotel in Los Angeles, I applied for the USA passport, so today I did the test and I passed with high grades, tomorrow I am going back to San Francisco to my other son, where I have been since 4 months. Next month I go back to Canada, I promise to keep in touch once I am back to Montreal. You can also write to me if you have my email. I might come and live here in SF and leave Canada, maybe. Thank you of your thoughts. Love Terry xoxo
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Date: 4/25/2014 9:42:00 PM
HEy sweet lady. I sure do miss you. Thought I would come here to let you know that I still think of you sometimes and wish you would email me like in the old days. Hope you are doing ok. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/20/2013 7:54:00 AM
Now this is jealous..defined! Wonderful...congratulations
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Date: 4/20/2013 8:05:00 AM
Donna, so nice of to remain my friend and pass by, Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/19/2013 9:50:00 PM
Hello Terry, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@
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Date: 4/19/2013 10:09:00 PM
Thank you PD, always wonderful feelings wherever you go. Good Night. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/19/2013 9:47:00 PM
Many congrats my dear friend Therese! This is indeed great and amazing ! I love it & so enjoyed. Jealousy I think can't really be avoided if we're soo deeply in love ;)) Thank you so much for sharing! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/19/2013 10:11:00 PM
Leonora my friend, so honest and extremely caring i can feel that from your comments. Have a great weekend thank you so much, for the attention i am getting from you lately. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/19/2013 8:39:00 PM
Therese Bacha, a sweet win~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:22:00 PM
Hi Skat, so nice of you to pass by, i am i really do appreciate that a lot. Thank you. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/5/2013 10:51:00 AM
This is good ; I like it.It reminds me of myself; I was only jealous once, when I was 18 and 19 years old. That was with my daughter's father. She had not been born yet. After that I was never Jealous again. I made that a promise. I didn't know there was a contest on this.... Lucilla
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Date: 4/5/2013 11:08:00 AM
Yes i added the last part for the contest, for PD.....i think it won a place. Love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 3/21/2013 12:50:00 AM
I loved it very good write! Jen
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Date: 3/21/2013 11:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, so glad you passed by. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 3/20/2013 5:02:00 PM
Excellent, Therese. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/21/2013 11:31:00 AM
Hi Ralph, thank you so much hope you laughed to....Love Terry xoxo
Date: 3/20/2013 6:11:00 AM
Excellent write for sure! Congrats!
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Date: 3/20/2013 9:28:00 AM
Hi Caleb, thank you for passing by, hope to see you again Love Terry
Date: 3/18/2013 6:35:00 PM
Hi Terry, thanks for the wonderful and awesome poem.. always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2013 8:20:00 PM
Thank you so much PD, i am so happy i made you laugh........see u next time.....hopefully....Love Terry xoxoox
Date: 2/11/2013 8:22:00 AM
I love this passionate heart which writes with so.muclh love and compassion.I wonder lf there is one wpman in d world who was never.jealous.The love you have for this person is complete adoration..Hope he s worth.the lot of it cos he s a very lucky mam
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Date: 2/11/2013 9:13:00 AM
Thank you my friend, it is true since i was young whatever i would do, run play etc. i would be in love always. Without love we cannot survive.. I am 76....and i am still in love....it is so nice of you to appreciate my poem. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 2/5/2013 12:30:00 PM
All-encompassing love! Being that jealous prevents one from enjoying... nevertheless, a thoroughly enjoyable poem! Terry
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Date: 2/6/2013 6:09:00 AM
Living the jealousy is very difficult you are right...if it can be helped......have a nice day...Terry xoxoxo Thank you.......
Date: 2/5/2013 4:59:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Creative ideas throughout the work..Enjoyed reading this morn..New and fresh ideas..Thanks for the honor of being in your favs..I was thinking about the love of God and being filled with the fruits of the spirit..Sara
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Date: 2/5/2013 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Sara so much....you are so right without the Love of God i could not have survived my past pains that happened to my family.....sharing with all of you at the soup eases my everyday......you are an extremely talented lady.i always enjoy reading your work...Have a nice day .Terry
Date: 2/5/2013 4:59:00 AM
Wow Terry you are a wonderful poet,, you bring such freshness here to soup,,just love this poem..
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Date: 2/5/2013 7:59:00 AM
I am so sorry Harry for sending you the wrong comments......having trouble ...thank you so much for passing by.....Terry
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Date: 2/5/2013 7:52:00 AM
hank you Sara so much....you are so right without the Love of God i could not have survived my past pains that happened to my family.....sharing with all of you at the soup eases my everyday......you are an extremely talented lady.i always enjoy reading your work...Have a nice day .Terry
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Date: 2/5/2013 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Sara so much....you are so right without the Love of God i could not have survived my past pains that happened to my family.....sharing with all of you at the soup eases my everyday......you are an extremely talented lady.i always enjoy reading your work...Have a nice day .Terry
Date: 2/4/2013 6:36:00 PM
wowowow, now this is GREAT poetic writing. The way you spoke of his hair, the sheets, the moon, all to reference your jealousy (which I know of course is not that bad) but I just LOVE this kind of writing. a FAVE for me, dear.
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Date: 2/4/2013 6:43:00 PM
It is all because of you my friend...thank you so so much.....i tried and i think yes it is working.........love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 2/4/2013 5:53:00 PM
Wow, this is surely a tremendous and impressionable write my friend! I loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What a powerful piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 2/4/2013 6:44:00 PM
Hello again ...thank you so so much...i tried to do my best.....i love writing,,Terry xoxo