Therese Bacha Poet Prose Poetry

A Jealous Woman In Love

~ A Jealous Woman In Love~

             Since I barely slept I felt ill as tears blinded my vision 
                     heart broken burning with desire to see him 
        to hold him to kiss him love him more and show him that strong will 
                     through my eyes to make him understand 
            I am a woman and should not be judged because I am jealous
                  I am a woman deeply in love how can I not be jealous 
          I am jealous of his sheets caressing his body when we share our bed 
         I am jealous of his hair being part of him all day when I am not with him 
                  even his eyes when he sees the moon instead of me 
      I am jealous of his phone feeling his breath or using a knife and fork to eat                    
              as I only wish at the time to feed him and caress his lips
            Oh! I love him so much that I became jealous of his shadow 
         so jealous I drowned in my thoughts like a fish thrown on the shore 
          by the raging waves trying to breath to survive without the oceans 
                                               salty water.
                          

For the contest of Andrea Dietrich
a poem For The Honor Of My FAVE Poetry.
                                                
Therese Bacha  ( Win No.1)
9/4/2013

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Therese Bacha April 26, 2014 at 1:17 AM Hi Andrea, I do swear I miss you to. I just came in my hotel in Los Angeles, I applied for the USA passport, so today I did the test and I passed with high grades, tomorrow I am going back to San Francisco to my other son, where I have been since 4 months. Next month I go back to Canada, I promise to keep in touch once I am back to Montreal. You can also write to me if you have my email. I might come and live here in SF and leave Canada, maybe. Thank you of your thoughts. Love Terry xoxo

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2014 at 9:42 PM HEy sweet lady. I sure do miss you. Thought I would come here to let you know that I still think of you sometimes and wish you would email me like in the old days. Hope you are doing ok. Luv, Andrea

Donna Jones April 20, 2013 at 7:54 AM Now this is jealous..defined! Wonderful...congratulations Therese Bacha April 20, 2013 at 8:05 AM Donna, so nice of to remain my friend and pass by, Love Terry xoxo

Poet Destroyer A April 19, 2013 at 9:50 PM Hello Terry, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@ Therese Bacha April 19, 2013 at 10:09 PM Thank you PD, always wonderful feelings wherever you go. Good Night. Love Terry xoxo

Len Gasun April 19, 2013 at 9:47 PM Many congrats my dear friend Therese! This is indeed great and amazing ! I love it & so enjoyed. Jealousy I think can't really be avoided if we're soo deeply in love ;)) Thank you so much for sharing! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora Therese Bacha April 19, 2013 at 10:11 PM Leonora my friend, so honest and extremely caring i can feel that from your comments. Have a great weekend thank you so much, for the attention i am getting from you lately. Love Terry xoxo

Skat A April 19, 2013 at 8:39 PM Therese Bacha, a sweet win~*~SKAT Therese Bacha April 19, 2013 at 9:22 PM Hi Skat, so nice of you to pass by, i am i really do appreciate that a lot. Thank you. Love Terry xoxo

Lucilla Carrillo April 5, 2013 at 10:51 AM This is good ; I like it.It reminds me of myself; I was only jealous once, when I was 18 and 19 years old. That was with my daughter's father. She had not been born yet. After that I was never Jealous again. I made that a promise. I didn't know there was a contest on this.... Lucilla Therese Bacha April 5, 2013 at 11:08 AM Yes i added the last part for the contest, for PD.....i think it won a place. Love Terry xoxoxo

Hidden Sister March 21, 2013 at 12:50 AM I loved it very good write! Jen Therese Bacha March 21, 2013 at 11:30 AM Thank you so much, so glad you passed by. Love Terry xoxo

Ralph Taylor March 20, 2013 at 5:02 PM Excellent, Therese. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph Therese Bacha March 21, 2013 at 11:31 AM Hi Ralph, thank you so much hope you laughed to....Love Terry xoxo

Painted Hunter March 20, 2013 at 6:11 AM Excellent write for sure! Congrats! Therese Bacha March 20, 2013 at 9:28 AM Hi Caleb, thank you for passing by, hope to see you again Love Terry

Poet Destroyer A March 18, 2013 at 6:35 PM Hi Terry, thanks for the wonderful and awesome poem.. always~ LINDA Therese Bacha March 18, 2013 at 8:20 PM Thank you so much PD, i am so happy i made you laugh........see u next time.....hopefully....Love Terry xoxoox

Charmaine Chircop February 11, 2013 at 8:22 AM I love this passionate heart which writes with so.muclh love and compassion.I wonder lf there is one wpman in d world who was never.jealous.The love you have for this person is complete adoration..Hope he s worth.the lot of it cos he s a very lucky mam Therese Bacha February 11, 2013 at 9:13 AM Thank you my friend, it is true since i was young whatever i would do, run play etc. i would be in love always. Without love we cannot survive.. I am 76....and i am still in love....it is so nice of you to appreciate my poem. Love Terry xoxo

Terry O'Leary February 5, 2013 at 12:30 PM All-encompassing love! Being that jealous prevents one from enjoying... nevertheless, a thoroughly enjoyable poem! Terry Therese Bacha February 6, 2013 at 6:09 AM Living the jealousy is very difficult you are right...if it can be helped......have a nice day...Terry xoxoxo Thank you.......

Harry Horsman February 5, 2013 at 4:59 AM Wow Terry you are a wonderful poet,, you bring such freshness here to soup,,just love this poem.. Therese Bacha February 5, 2013 at 7:59 AM I am so sorry Harry for sending you the wrong comments......having trouble ...thank you so much for passing by.....Terry Therese Bacha February 5, 2013 at 7:52 AM hank you Sara so much....you are so right without the Love of God i could not have survived my past pains that happened to my family.....sharing with all of you at the soup eases my everyday......you are an extremely talented lady.i always enjoy reading your work...Have a nice day .Terry Therese Bacha February 5, 2013 at 7:50 AM Thank you Sara so much....you are so right without the Love of God i could not have survived my past pains that happened to my family.....sharing with all of you at the soup eases my everyday......you are an extremely talented lady.i always enjoy reading your work...Have a nice day .Terry

Sara Kendrick February 5, 2013 at 4:59 AM Very descriptive and expressive work..Creative ideas throughout the work..Enjoyed reading this morn..New and fresh ideas..Thanks for the honor of being in your favs..I was thinking about the love of God and being filled with the fruits of the spirit..Sara Therese Bacha February 5, 2013 at 7:58 AM Thank you Sara so much....you are so right without the Love of God i could not have survived my past pains that happened to my family.....sharing with all of you at the soup eases my everyday......you are an extremely talented lady.i always enjoy reading your work...Have a nice day .Terry

Andrea Dietrich February 4, 2013 at 6:36 PM wowowow, now this is GREAT poetic writing. The way you spoke of his hair, the sheets, the moon, all to reference your jealousy (which I know of course is not that bad) but I just LOVE this kind of writing. a FAVE for me, dear. Therese Bacha February 4, 2013 at 6:43 PM It is all because of you my friend...thank you so so much.....i tried and i think yes it is working.........love Terry xoxoxo

Russell Sivey February 4, 2013 at 5:53 PM Wow, this is surely a tremendous and impressionable write my friend! I loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What a powerful piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!! Therese Bacha February 4, 2013 at 6:44 PM Hello again ...thank you so so much...i tried to do my best.....i love writing,,Terry xoxo