Reminisce

Thinking we do! Living or not we all do ! Giving we all do to who we give we do! Laughing we all do! We all pass through the valley of death through pain regrets a sadness too and our bodies stands the test of time to fuel our aspirations
I once was young but now I am old! Never seen the righteous forsaken!
Never cried alone always child protected loved sound mind in the atmosphere of life joy gifted blessed questions gone love of heaven silent stand a love song request.Never asking myself why! But all the rest yes! We ask! With a helmet of salvation secret  covered veil of  interest a eagle eyes warriors vision. The eagle eye shining on who when how where within myself the shatterd zone! Then the battle with self begins lifelong! Remembering never is I alone in the swords of life is drawn line upon line within myself my spirit my flesh my soul all is there one body one way one life!  We stand !The lines are alway drawn!
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Date: 12/31/2024 9:54:00 PM
"An eagle eyes warrior's vision," gives me the sense that God is watching over you in your struggles in life. It is good to know that a higher power really cares about our every trials. This seems to be a "stream of consciousness" poem. I am relieved when I read "Remembering never is I alone."
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Brenda J. Joyce
Date: 1/18/2025 7:54:00 AM
My Writer Friend Thank you so much!
Date: 12/30/2024 1:01:00 PM
Wow. Lots of exclamations. Hope you're well. Interesting poem
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Brenda J. Joyce
Date: 12/30/2024 4:09:00 PM
Oh wow thank you for passing by you so kind you like exclamations.
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