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I'm crawling twords the emptiness My shallow darkend thoughts It's like something you've known to be true but then you find It's not. James ..........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/6/2011 11:05:00 AM
This poem reminds me of how when were little everyone preaches that love is sooo great until you suffer heartache and see it's not as amazing as everyone made it out to be. Great poem(:
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:19:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry James. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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