What Ever

I'm crawling twords 
                                              the emptiness
                                              My shallow 
                                                    darkend thoughts

                                             It's like something 
                                                 you've  known 
                                                to be true 
                                               but then you find 
                                                        It's 
                                                       not.

                                                                          James ..........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 6, 2011 at 11:05 AM
This poem reminds me of how when were little everyone preaches that love is sooo great until you suffer heartache and see it's not as amazing as everyone made it out to be. Great poem(:
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April 5, 2011 at 4:19 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry James. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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