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Sky Above Us

holes we dig in earth heats the carbon in the air sky high above us. copyright 2011 Anne Rutherford

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Date: 11/6/2011 9:51:00 AM
our skies have changed,,from our destruction that is for sure,,,,great haiku...
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Date: 6/20/2011 2:16:00 PM
As the moon shines bright at night. The carbon dust twinkles with requite. It rhymes, not sure if makes sense.
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:56:00 AM
thank you Ann for reading and commenting on Midnight Moon.
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Date: 5/15/2011 1:29:00 AM
what a good one for those conscious of teh environment. I enjoyed this, Anne!
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Date: 5/10/2011 10:31:00 AM
The beauty of the sky high. Thanks Anne R. =(^.^)= Royal
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Date: 5/3/2011 11:45:00 AM
much enjoyed your haiku Anne, take care,..p.d.
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Date: 4/24/2011 10:43:00 PM
Great job Mrs. Anne! Thank you for your reviews and for helping me identify the senryu:) I love to write, but I am not schooled in the sense that I know what I'm writing. It just flows from the heart:D I'm like you, I miss the 10 system, but I'm going to give this a 7. God Bless you always, R.M.
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Date: 4/22/2011 12:38:00 PM
a beautiful Haiku
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Date: 4/22/2011 9:26:00 AM
A wonderful haiku to celebrate Earth Day, Anne. Guess you and I would enjoy yoga together. We both stand on our heads! And I'm no youngster. Have a great holiday weekend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/22/2011 6:18:00 AM
Nice haiku !!
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Date: 4/22/2011 5:35:00 AM
Good haiku Anne...very appropriate for Earth Day...good to see you on this site.
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