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Sky Above Us

holes we dig in earth 
                                    heats the carbon in the air
                                        sky high above us.


                                       copyright 2011
                                       Anne Rutherford

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John Aaron Green

November 6, 2011 at 9:51 AM

our skies have changed,,from our destruction that is for sure,,,,great haiku...

Robert Johnson

June 20, 2011 at 2:16 PM

As the moon shines bright at night. The carbon dust twinkles with requite. It rhymes, not sure if makes sense.

James Foulk

May 25, 2011 at 10:56 AM

thank you Ann for reading and commenting on Midnight Moon.

Andrea Dietrich

May 15, 2011 at 1:29 AM

what a good one for those conscious of teh environment. I enjoyed this, Anne!

Royal Trevino

May 10, 2011 at 10:31 AM

The beauty of the sky high. Thanks Anne R. =(^.^)= Royal

Poet Destroyer A

May 3, 2011 at 11:45 AM

much enjoyed your haiku Anne, take care,..p.d.

Matt Hunt

April 24, 2011 at 10:43 PM

Great job Mrs. Anne! Thank you for your reviews and for helping me identify the senryu:) I love to write, but I am not schooled in the sense that I know what I'm writing. It just flows from the heart:D I'm like you, I miss the 10 system, but I'm going to give this a 7. God Bless you always, R.M.

James Foulk

April 22, 2011 at 12:38 PM

a beautiful Haiku

Carolyn Devonshire

April 22, 2011 at 9:26 AM

A wonderful haiku to celebrate Earth Day, Anne. Guess you and I would enjoy yoga together. We both stand on our heads! And I'm no youngster. Have a great holiday weekend. Love, Carolyn