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hallucinations - wise enough to understand ... castles in the air - world seems different and changed ... lonely and empty bottle 22/07/2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Tanka 5-7-5-7-7

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/10/2020 6:01:00 AM

These poems bring out the sadness of alcoholism. Then all the righteous come out~ holier than thorough-ERs are worse than alcoholics. Alcoholics can and do get sober. Try Betty Ford. She overcame an addiction and opened clinics. I think that Old movie Wine and Roses should be required viewing. Alcoholics are human beings with an addiction. They may die from it. Anyway, sorry to talk so much. Well written... Thanks Pangiexx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/10/2020 10:11:00 AM

- It's a serious issue, Panagiota - Thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/6/2020 11:00:00 AM

hI anne-Lise, another powerful write from your golden pen. Your words rncapsulte your thought excellently. I am so glad I gave up any kind of alcoholic beverage in my late twenties. The strongest drink I have is tea. Too many people have a dependency on drink. Have a wonderful Thursday. Love and Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2020 11:02:00 AM

- The strongest drink I have is coffee :))) - Thank you very much for your visit and lovely comments, my friend Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/27/2020 1:36:00 PM

Sad but true. Seems the alcohol drinking has picked up with this virus in our part of the country. Addictions of any kind are not good. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/2/2020 7:07:00 AM

- Thank you very much Phyllis, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2020 3:10:00 PM

Your poem seems to wind around that bottle. Nicely done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/2/2020 7:07:00 AM

- Thank you very much Kim, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/25/2020 7:43:00 AM

So true a description and clever pic - where do you find them - an amazing poem but sad in reality. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2020 1:43:00 PM

Hi dear sister Jenny ... I find all my photos on pinterest.com ... - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/24/2020 10:24:00 PM

So well expressed, Sunshine:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2020 1:41:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/23/2020 12:15:00 PM

well done, anne-lise! best of luck in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2020 1:40:00 PM

- Thank you very much Ilene, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/23/2020 10:32:00 AM

What a clever tanka, Sunshine! Can't imagine the "delirium" I'd feel after drinking an entire bottle. Nice to read your work again! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2020 1:39:00 PM

- I can not remember the last time I drank something with alcohol - we are all different ... yes thank you, for a bottle of water :) - Thank you very much for your comments, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/23/2020 10:05:00 AM

This happens often at the bottom of a bottle lol, i for one don't drink but I got my own form of delirium, winning wishes my friend xo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2020 1:36:00 PM

- When the bottle is empty ... most of it is empty - Thank you very much for your comments, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/23/2020 2:59:00 AM

A sad story is written so beautifully dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2020 1:34:00 PM

- Many share this story, unfortunately ... a life so wasted - Thank you very much for your comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/22/2020 2:36:00 PM

Sad that many only get by with a bottle a day. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're well Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2020 1:32:00 PM

- An expensive "pleasure" alcohol is very expensive in Norway - Thank you very much for your comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/22/2020 2:18:00 PM

Well done. So well done. A fave. My best to you in the contest, xomo <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2020 1:29:00 PM

- Sad, but grateful for your fave Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/22/2020 2:16:00 PM

So well you illustrate the effects of alcohol on some. All the best, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2020 1:27:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your comments, Vijay - A sad fate - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2020 12:59:00 PM

a superb but sad interpretation of the theme, addiction of any type takes it toll:_( hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2020 1:26:00 PM

- An empty and sad life, Jan - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)