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Slitting of the wrists Mental help is wanted now This is suicide

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 10/17/2022 1:57:00 AM

Jeanette a griping poem. I'm not interested in what style or form of poem this is; I'm more interested in the title... How absolutely perfect. Thank you so much...

Kathryn Search

Date: 10/16/2022 1:41:00 PM

I LOOKED FURTHER INTO THIS, THE OTHER WORD IS SENRYU. SO THIS POEM WOULD FIT THAT, IT SEEMS.

Kathryn Search

Date: 10/16/2022 1:19:00 PM

Isn't a poem like this called by another name than Haiku, since it is about people? The syllables are the same, but it this isn't actually on nature. I wish I remembered what it is called.

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/27/2022 6:37:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." The Lord's blessings be with you.