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9:17

At nine-seventeen p.m, my whole world stopped. Distincely I remember this because through tear-bleared eyes, I saw the numbers lit in green - 9:17 - on the face of my microwave next to the door. Next to that same door through which you exited so hastily, so heartlessly, so unexpectedly with not even a kiss good-bye. . . though I guess that would have made it even worse. I’d rather think of our last kiss as we lay at night in bed when I believed you cared, when unbridled passion and bliss still ruled my heart. Years pass, and I’ve not found another man to take the place of you. Once in a great while, late at night, I go into my kitchen, perhaps to brew some tea, and on the microwave those numbers from the day you left assault my eyes, lit in green - 9:17 - be cursed!

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Date: 5/19/2020 11:57:00 PM
It is amazing what little things may trigger and emotion Andrea. I am happy to see this be in second place. I enjoyed it! Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 7/17/2018 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. So real. Well done!
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Date: 7/15/2018 2:35:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win.
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Date: 7/15/2018 2:29:00 AM
A fine piece, Andrea, and I liked the domestic twist on it. Congrats! Viv x
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Date: 7/14/2018 12:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Such a captivating story.
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Date: 7/14/2018 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/14/2018 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea! I really liked that unfortunately her pain of that night repeats by the green light on the microwave every night putting the emphasis on 9:17 pm.
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Date: 7/14/2018 8:11:00 AM
Another twist on the them. Well done Andrea, but now I'm sad. : (
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Date: 7/14/2018 7:46:00 AM
Andrea, it seems there is no "nice" way to break someone's heart. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 7/14/2018 7:26:00 AM
Wow, another first for me, I'll recheck the first place and see what I'm missing? Mick
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Date: 7/11/2018 4:14:00 PM
I like how you took on this contest, really well done...good luck
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Date: 7/10/2018 6:59:00 PM
You inscribe the numbers with indelible ink! GL in contest!
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Date: 7/9/2018 4:42:00 PM
9:17...marks the spot...there may be other times but 9:17 was just fine...Nice one Andrea...All the best
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Date: 7/9/2018 12:46:00 PM
Well done; you've summed it all up nicely.
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Date: 7/9/2018 9:46:00 AM
Very talented, I really like it, i felt the emotion of it, to me when i read a poem if you cry, laughing or anything else it just means you are stirring things up, that's a good thing
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Date: 7/9/2018 8:58:00 AM
Andrea.. you have me in a muse with your write of my own past memories.. I think I'll stay here awhile. Thank you!
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Date: 7/9/2018 7:51:00 AM
9:17 pm, not a minute more, it is funny that how a minute can change our whole destiny, one moment we are happy and it only takes a second to change everything, it was a really beautiful and sad poem written by you,good luck in he contest,
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Date: 7/9/2018 7:12:00 AM
Your story comes alive with passionate memories. A special love it was for no one can take that place..well depicted, Andrea.
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Date: 7/9/2018 3:15:00 AM
Excellent Andrea! "those numbers from the day you left assault my eyes,". I will bet this does great in the contest. : )
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Date: 7/9/2018 3:14:00 AM
Funny how a time of an unhappy event stays with you forever. Well written Andrea. Good luck. Tom
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