8 Years Old

In a blink, dot of ink
Your childhood, now, a stain
I was just a fool, to think
Innocence would remain

A picture show
Heart tugging song
I pretend to know
Where 8 years have gone

Yesterday, I rhymed a rhyme
You were turning 4, too soon
A teardrop fell, for every line
While wrapping up my tune

Today came, I feel numb
Just as I was told
Yesterday, you were 4 years young
Today, you’re twice as old
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Our son is 27 and it seems like yesterday he was a teenager and the day before just two years old. This piece expresses the passing of time so well. Each age offers a gift, enjoy them all.
Pinet Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 5:48 PM
Your poem flows with the beat of a mother's heart and the words say everything...evoking thoughts within the reader's consciousness that places them in the moment. Emile.
Smith Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Eight is such a great age...hold on tight before they are off on their own
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