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8 Word Implosion of the Heart

Implosion of the heart with grim, dark clouds overhead. 
Wistful thoughts overwhelm, there are now feelings of dread. 
And the shroud of dementia it seems never to part. 
With grim dark clouds overhead, implosion of the heart. 

The Prognosis is gloomy it leads to depression. 
When the mist is withdrawn,my mind clears all impression. 
That I can write poetry well, really threw me. 
It leads to depression, the prognosis is gloomy.
 
Loneliness is not my friend, means all memory lost. 
Many precious times gone at undeniable cost. 
Times of anger or torment, wishing a final end. 
Means all memory lost, loneliness is not my friend.
 
Yet now a man quite sane, there's no hope of me choosing. 
Ebb and tide of this morbid disease is confusing. 
Melancholy thoughts, I so wish to have a well brain. 
There's no hope of me choosing, yet now a man quite sane.

Copyright © Merv Hold | Year Posted 2023

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Beata Agustin Date: 6/23/2023 2:59:00 AM Congrats! Thanks for sharing your poetic talent. God bless you. Login to Reply Merv Hold Date: 7/11/2023 8:11:00 PM Beata, so kind, To have you see the small amount of talent I have for poetry, is so encouraging. Your comment brought me a nice feeling, dear lady. Thank you.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 6/22/2023 6:22:00 AM Wow Merv. Dementia is scary and you have written about it with such ease. I'm impressed ;) Congratulations on your win my friend! :) Login to Reply Merv Hold Date: 7/11/2023 8:16:00 PM Sometimes Linda, the fog lifts, and some days it as thick as pea soup. On the clear days I used to just sit and remember, now I go to the computer and type. On "pea soup days" I look and wonder how I wrote that. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Today is a clear day.

Speaks Volumes Date: 6/21/2023 5:26:00 PM Congratulions. A well earned place in the contest Merv. A well written poem. Login to Reply Merv Hold Date: 6/21/2023 9:26:00 PM Thanx fellow poet. Glad you liked it. Always appreciate your comments lovely lady.

Emile Pinet Date: 6/21/2023 5:08:00 PM Congratulations Merv, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Very well done, you were successful against a field of talented poets, my friend; Emile. Login to Reply Merv Hold Date: 6/21/2023 9:25:00 PM Hey Emile, you mean "other" talented poets, dont you ??? I am getting pretty good at this game. Not even needing my Granddaughter's help now. Thanks mate for the place in your contest. I am enjoying writing this stuff, and contests like yours are helping. Thanks.