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83 Breaths

“83 BREATHS”



everyone’s hell is a 
different temperature.
the ride into it 
never breaks down.
12 to 12 hell remains.
hell stays like leaches 
sucking what’s left of 
your life.
hell is in every direction, 
every face, and every move.
the words pull from the 
fire and lay upon straw.
before I disappear into 
my sleep, I stop, look, 
I listen.
I can hear the tears of 
the frogs fall from their 
faces.
if our planet is the only 
one with our type of life, 
how lucky are the others 
that no pain exists.
I can wrap this up now, 
reading as I write.
no one can hear me.
birds drop, dandelions 
born bald and there are 
no more bandages for 
scraped knees.
families break, children cry, 
bloodsuckers raise the heat 
in the kitchen.
as we climb into the oven, 
prepare for the next stop. 
Sylvia Plath waits.



By: Chicano Eddie
10-28-2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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