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7:30 A.M.

In the morning, the sweet aroma of Carnation wafts from the earth of wine fed sleep. The unrelenting chimes of a lone tweeter that you can’t fail to notice and yet- you let him chime all the while the kitchen, wasting your treasured time. A bird of passage is waiting outside, his radio is on, Frank Sinatra’s “My Way” tends his patience. Now once more, you’ve to tip him with generosity and Carnation fills the day with her spice-scented moral stories of domesticities.

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Date: 3/15/2009 4:16:00 AM
I tell you Santiago you have full cargo og imagery and sensibility, I notice a continuance of themes, is this deliberate? If so my friend, you have been given the poet's Holy Grail to quest, and you will need good telescopes for the tree of happiness. Great poetry.
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