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6 To 8 Rag Doll

Beautiful at one time, now withering in sorrow, tears, and hope. She shrugs, as she moved her black hair letting it hang over her shoulder feeling a tremor of trepidation. She gazes at her reflection in the mirror tracing the bruises around her face. Her eyes welled with tears wondering what she ever saw in him, how easy would it be like to run away; trying to ease her discomfort? All she wanted was the perfect married life, instead beaten like a ragdoll, a victim in pain. 10/25/2017

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Date: 10/31/2017 3:56:00 PM
eve, how intense is this wonderful poem!.. thanks for joining and congrats for a winning slopt!
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Date: 10/31/2017 12:55:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your win.
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:47:00 PM
So sad, but well-written, Eve. So many 'rag dolls' like this I am sure. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/30/2017 3:08:00 PM
- Congratulations, dear Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2017 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/28/2017 11:33:00 PM
It's very sad that some people just lack compassion totally. I like your take on the theme.
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Date: 10/26/2017 5:58:00 PM
oh so sad Eve, I too chose the theme of abuse and have seen several others on the same topic:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/26/2017 2:13:00 PM
- A sad picture, Eve - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2017 8:45:00 AM
Very deep and sad poetry Eve... any form of abuse is horrific..
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Date: 10/26/2017 2:52:00 AM
Excellent write but sad. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 10/25/2017 10:02:00 PM
A sad write!
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Date: 10/25/2017 8:07:00 PM
Very said indeed Eve, well written!
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:42:00 PM
A sad life well depicted.. best for a win Eve!
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:41:00 PM
Oh, Eve. you and I are on the same page about rag doll. I think this is a very popular contest and rag doll a very popular theme, as I am seeing several rag doll poems today!! Great minds..... Hope this does really well in the contest.
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