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This is a true story, I found my Grandma's old rag doll in the attic one day,

when I was a little girl and  "looking around at stuff".

Holly Rag  Doll burned in a house fire and Grandma made me a new one.

 

In a dark corner of the attic I found her, among the filigree cobwebs, soot and dust on a shelve; a forgotten and tattered rag doll. I caressed her soft limbs and gave her a kiss . . . taking her to my room, I gave her a bath, and washed her dress and placed her in the sun. She was old and withered, shabby, and raggedy, but I loved her with all of my little girl heart. ________________________ October 24, 2017 Poetry/Verse/Rag Doll Copyright Protected 2017, ID 17- 9522-00-0 All Rights Reserved. Written for the contest, 6 to 8 sponsor, Nette Onclaud Second Place

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Date: 10/31/2017 4:56:00 PM
What a wonderful trip down memory lane to all those special things we held in reverie as a child, congrats on your win
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Date: 10/31/2017 3:16:00 PM
constance, beautifully crafted till the end; i like the poetic mood of your work...best congrats on your high placement and thanks for the inspiration you put in the contest!
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Date: 10/31/2017 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations BW on your win with a fine poem.
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Broken Wings, for a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:39:00 PM
So very sweet and well-written, Constance. Congrats on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/30/2017 2:59:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2017 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your high placement. Cute piece.
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:19:00 PM
oh, this is darling, Constance. I wrote a similar one about my pink bear called Pinky Winky a long time ago! Nothing can replace the ORIGINAL.
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Date: 10/25/2017 1:06:00 PM
Yes it can never be the same. It was thoughtful of them to try.
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Date: 10/25/2017 3:44:00 AM
This is a very wondrous write, that is filled with emotion from a child's perspective! What an amazing poem, so filled with aspiring hope at the end of something new that will come...maybe even improved! I surely enjoyed reading your delightfully positive ending this morning! What a fantastic piece, Excellent Work my friend!!
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