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His Raggedy Ann He called her his Raggedy Ann for her long red locks and skinny frame, and when he beat her, she'd collapse like a rag doll to the floor. Using cruel tactics, he distanced her from family and her few friends. She was but a concubine to gratify his desires, to cook and to clean. Accustomed to abuse since childhood, she knew no other way, but still she dreamed through her woes of a Raggedy Andy who could love her. The day she fought back was when he punched her belly; she lost her baby. No longer limp, she has become a skeleton buried in a woods far far away. Oct. 25, 2017 for the ' 6 TO 8' Contest of nette onclaud

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Date: 10/31/2017 5:00:00 PM
A very sad tragic tale beautifully exposed in this write, congratulations once again my friend
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Date: 10/31/2017 3:24:00 PM
you got me all riled up, andie... beautifully relayed that congrats are in order for a well-deserved award... thanks for showing other sides of you...
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Date: 10/31/2017 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your with a fine poem.
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. So very sad, but these unbelievable events to happen, and your well-written poem reminds us that our world is not perfect or fair at times. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:55:00 PM
back to congratulate you for a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/30/2017 3:47:00 PM
Wonderful write,Andrea.very touchy..Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 10/30/2017 3:03:00 PM
- Congratulations, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2017 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Very, very sad.
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Date: 10/28/2017 5:45:00 AM
A powerful and quite disturbing write, Andrea. Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.
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Date: 10/27/2017 7:22:00 AM
Chilling rag doll tale Andrea...
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Date: 10/27/2017 6:41:00 AM
If blonde hair was worn by Raggedy, Would this possible become a tragedy; Worn for while; Was her style; Trump thinks that he is our majesty.
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Date: 10/26/2017 6:56:00 PM
A sad story but often all too true. Good luck in the contest Andrea.
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Date: 10/26/2017 4:59:00 PM
An excellent take on the contest Andrea.. Good luck..
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Date: 10/26/2017 2:16:00 PM
- A sad story, Andrea - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2017 9:52:00 AM
This is quite sad but a wonderful write. All the best in the contest
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Date: 10/26/2017 9:31:00 AM
Excellent take on the contest Andrea..
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Date: 10/26/2017 8:34:00 AM
There is no doubt that you are a poet. Exceptional writing Andrea.
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Date: 10/26/2017 6:15:00 AM
My dear Andrea..... why?
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/27/2017 8:11:00 AM
Hi Again, The why question is toward human nature. How come some of us are SO cruel. You are right it happens too many times, in too many places.... The only thing we need is more love....
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/26/2017 8:05:00 PM
because it happens more than people know. Someone has to tell their stories.
Date: 10/26/2017 2:29:00 AM
Excellent write although it is extremely sad. All the best for the contest. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 10/25/2017 10:12:00 PM
This brings sadness to my eyes, such a well expressed poem though!
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:44:00 PM
This is extremely sad! I had a lump in my throat reading this poem. This is an impactful write.
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:31:00 PM
Such a sad poem about a very sad life Andrea. Your poem is poignanty expressed and your first two lines are shockingly and powerfully emotive. Well done. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 10/25/2017 6:09:00 PM
Well written story of a sad life with a very sad ending, just as intended for the contest--best for a win!
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Date: 10/25/2017 6:02:00 PM
Great impact in my emotions , Andrea :'( Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/25/2017 5:50:00 PM
Boy this is a sad one Andrea! I am not aware of the contest. I will have to check it out but I am not up to writing a sad poem right now. You did great on your entry! : )
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