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6 To 8--Sunlight In Your Eyes

Cruising softly through virtue of morning Among primordial wood and fragrant garlands; New aurora dazzles inside your lenses , Such afterglow which gently brings forth The rosy advent of bridal charm-- And this unfolding of sun’s first nuptial radiance Is mirrored within my own ardent eyes, Hallow as life’s blessed sacrament. Contest: 6 TO 8 submitted to Nette Onclaud 26th Oct 2017

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Date: 10/31/2017 4:49:00 PM
This is simply beautiful writing my friend, congrats on your well deserved first place finish
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Date: 10/31/2017 3:03:00 PM
warm congrats on your first-prize; i was beguiled by the warmth and flow of your awesome piece... thanks for entering, franco!
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Date: 10/30/2017 2:56:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Franco - // S.S.
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Date: 10/26/2017 9:33:00 AM
Wow, man! I read some verses for this competition and this ebullient piece rates very high for me. Like you, I still adore my better-half, Blimp. May your marriage be blessed!
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