5 Footle

Torrent Rain Storm heavy levee ~ Perfect Chef Salad salad ballad ~ Sexy Super Model chin up pin up ~ The Last Go Around fate debate ~ 5 O'Clock Traffic stuck chuck

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2016 9:57:00 AM

Footles so fine upon the winners’ list are awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara ..What happened to two syllables in The Last Go Around and 5 O'Clock Traffic?..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2016 1:43:00 PM

- Rick, congrats on your great second place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2016 1:34:00 PM

many congrats Rick these were very clever footles:-) I was actually looking for a string of footles that told a complete story ... this style will be ideal for the next contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/26/2016 11:20:00 AM

Clever rhymes, Rick! I especially like the one about the last debate. I wish the election were over as I miss hearing about other news. I'm sorry you missed my contest. All of the entries were wonderful. Hugs, Carolyn

Chris Green

Date: 10/26/2016 8:49:00 AM

I had no idea what a footle was until now. I've seen many titles that list this form but I wasn't expecting something as cool as this. This was a fantastic collection of perfectly designed rhyming thoughts. Great job Rick. Oh, the validate code for this is 94u...if it had been 54u, that would have been really weird. :)

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/26/2016 8:39:00 AM

Fine footl'n!