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50th Birthday Present Tomorrow At 48

Apparently tomorrow

Between the hour's

Of 10am and 1pm

I have recently earlier
this day just been informed

From my sister and 3 niece's

That i am to and should expect 
a knock upon my house
downstairs front door

As my 50th birthday shall
arrive

And given that i am still
only 48 year's young

And my actual birthday isn't 
even till mid November 12th

So confused was i left 
wondering what on earth 
in fact they we're implying

And should i now expect the
card accompanying it to
have this inscription on it

Just incase you do not make
it to the ripe old age of 50

All of us chipped in and thought
we would present you with this
parting gift 

1 and some year's belated early

I hope you like it as it came
from the bottom of our heart

And pondered over it both
long and very hard

As we thought it sums up
who you really are and what
we think of you

And what you ask is to
come in that box 

I will only be able to relay to you
tomorrow when it arrives

I alone can only pray and in
my wildest dreams this wish

Is it is a box wrapped up and stuffed
in old discarded newspaper 

With 1 singular 50 pence
coin nothing more and
not neither in mint condition

And ferverently scratching head
and contemplating what the
he'll this gesture meant

I calmed and came to this
conclusion when the penny
eventually did drop

A single penny for every year
thus far i haved lived 

And what better value to place
upon something as a life
so priceless

As demeaning and devaluing
it by adding countless pointless
zero's at the end 

**** Update ****

What I received yesterday and was actually
in the box

Was this brand-new phone so as I can
keep in touch with them 

I am currently typing this message out
to you now on

Which obviously cost a hell of a
lot more than 50 pence

In fact you would have to place a few zero
on at the end instead

And they obviously all had to club together
to buy me and pay for as in reality probably
can't afford it

Which without being or seeming totally ungrateful
as I am truly grateful and really like it

I honestly wish they hadn't and much
rather preferred 

If they had not wasted it or spent that money 
on something or someone else 

As surely even to me there are or must be far
more deserving , important or in pressing need 
of help

Than me myself or I am

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 9/20/2021 12:30:00 PM
Hey nice twist from the update, wasn't expecting that, your self deprecation is apparent and palpable, but I do believe you got a little ray of hope with your premature birthday gift, and may you get many years of enjoyment from it, cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/22/2021 3:17:00 PM
Cheers David I know I will and should be far more appreciative

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