4th Floor Penthouse

Waves of blue extend as far as the eye can see
raising high above the leafless treetops I dwell
a turquoise statue rests in the parkway
broken kneecaps and fingers but I don't know who
is attributed this honor dressed in flags of red
I close my eyes and imagine the battle scar
at Fort Sheridan where settlers dreams came true
A black bird glides down upon this glory
the sun starts shining through the clouds
and my thoughts wander to visions of you

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Date: 4/2/2017 1:59:00 AM
Good Morning Tim. I turned to this entry not knowing what I would read. Reading your words of broken kneecaps and fingers I didn't know you needed medical attention. I hope you are mending and your pain level is low. I very much enjoyed the title. You were able to see humor in all the madness. And yes, you ended on a beautiful reflective thought and note. Hope all is well.
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:02:00 AM
Tim Get well soon! By the way....Your muse is in excellent health!! May that sun shine on you! I loved this poetic painting! My best to you, chuck
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Date: 2/16/2017 11:13:00 PM
That it a perfect description of that view! How apt... We'll see each other again soon, both home in no time :) Take care, my friend!
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Date: 2/16/2017 10:16:00 PM
Its as if I have seen this view! I hope you are getting along and up and about real soon Tim!
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Date: 2/16/2017 7:56:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/16/2017 8:04:00 PM
Thanks Andrea... That's the view from my hospital room
Date: 2/16/2017 6:33:00 PM
Lovely views of the Lake <3 It feels like I am sitting there with you :)
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Date: 2/16/2017 8:03:00 PM
Thanks Sara...They had me sitting in a chair by the window for most of the day...And that's my view
Date: 2/16/2017 2:58:00 PM
Must be some view! Hoping you are well. I love this poem:)
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Date: 2/16/2017 3:00:00 PM
A little sore and tired but they are calling me their rockstar..: ))
Date: 2/16/2017 1:52:00 PM
- A wonderful painting from your window, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/16/2017 2:30:00 PM
Thank you A-L
Date: 2/16/2017 1:41:00 PM
I love your 'penthouse' view, Tim, and the ending! Regards // paul
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/16/2017 2:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul
Date: 2/16/2017 1:40:00 PM
You make us picture this view Tim.What a beautiful poem ..
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/16/2017 2:24:00 PM
Thanks Charmu...My room is overlooking Lak e Shore Drive and Lake Michigan : ))
Date: 2/16/2017 12:01:00 PM
This was very cool Tim, I like the directions this went and the scene we got to se through your words and the ending is superb. Really nicely done, very creative and imaginative.
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Date: 2/16/2017 12:51:00 PM
Thanks Chris. The is what I am looking out at from my chair.
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