4 and 20 Pies - No Blackbirds

4 and 20 Pies – No Blackbirds


Oh, spare me the plethora of pies
the thumbs-up plumbs,
the pie in the sky dreams
of the pie lovers,
the onerous moooo
of the piebald cow
being milked
by the pie-eyed farmer
as his pied piper wife
lures the chickens
into a pot pie.
Pie charts to measure
children against nourishment,
who cuts, who chooses,
statistically
who wins, who loses,
 “pies the type”
of apples on the floor.
It ain’t that simple, Simon
say the “pietist”
who fear
that if Pi can’t be squared
pies end is drawing near.


John G. Lawless
10/9/2014

submitted to – Sheri Fresonke Harper
Plentitude of Pies – Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/9/2014 9:34:00 AM
Great variations of pie John. Congratulations on your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:07:00 PM
Thanks Brenda, I've never fully gotten the 4 and 20 blackbirds or the thumb out of the pie.
Date: 12/9/2014 8:59:00 AM
Interesting poem, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:01:00 PM
cute, I like this, congratulations, John.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:08:00 PM
Thanks, I have a lot of fun playing with the wondrous whimsy of words.
Date: 12/8/2014 2:18:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats made me smile a second time - great write:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/8/2014 12:55:00 PM
I love inteligent play on words, congrats.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Richard
Date: 12/8/2014 11:00:00 AM
John, although you can count, it seems you don't eat quite right, just teasing. Lovely take on a pie poem. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:10:00 PM
Thank you Sheri for your time and effort in sponsoring the contest.
Date: 10/10/2014 6:00:00 PM
Witty and clever take on this pie theme, John! Very enjoyable Hope it does well in the contest. // paul
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Date: 10/9/2014 10:24:00 PM
Classy way to do that contest!! wish I could be this clever I will probably just do one of those Epulaeryu form poems!! You are a SMART writer.
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Date: 10/9/2014 5:09:00 PM
LOl love the humour here - good luck with the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2014 5:31:00 PM
:-) my pleasure XX
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John Lawless
Date: 10/9/2014 5:22:00 PM
Thanks Jan, your comment means a lot to an old guy with a flaky crust.
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