3 min write

I stare piteously at my grandkid-
kid jumping with aggressive joy 
at each completed level of
a mindless game displayed 
on the computer screen, 
played by hitting a key 
repeatedly, with hands trembling

will-less I crane my neck
to look upwards through rows of
buildings, all I see is
A handful of stars in a hazy, 
un-naturally 
lit-up bright night sky
less cared by many bumbling lives

Each innocent night, every 
night as a child, I used to 
sit by my father who 
made up stories divine on 
group of stars
a line, a mat, a dog so like
animated with my awesome nods

I used to hear his voice
till I drooped like a feather
sound asleep, sleep
so pure, so restful
even angels smiled
and twirled then
in my dreams with colorful streams

That serene childhood
filled with fun, with love
rich with truth, with honesty
that angel sleep,that angel dream
can never be passed on
can never be re-lived
through our children, ever again
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Hind Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 3:11 PM
Very beautiful, even sad- memories are cherished so much because they can never be relived again
mysore Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 8:53 PM
I agree with your words, 'cannot be relived'. Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Your thoughts on the poem means so much to me. Blessings & cheers.
Crandall Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 3:59 PM
Nice poem Thriveni - a little sad. I think it's not the first one where you mention your father's stories. He must've been a pretty good storyteller!
mysore Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 9:35 PM
Yes dear poet friend, My dad influenced my childhood. I lost him when I was just a 10 year old kid. All I have is to treasure the memories of those 10 years. Parents play a very important role in building character of children. Next comes the teacher. Now that I am slow, just loosing grip on changing times. Thank you for your pleasant words dear poet. Blessings & cheers.
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 3:51 PM
Wow. Three minutes? You did amazing!
mysore Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 9:29 PM
Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad I could finish my lines in three minutes. Thank you for your words, means so much to me. Blessings & cheers.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 12:54 PM
What a wonderful three minute write/story. I enjoyed reading this one. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away.................
mysore Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 9:27 PM
A joy to see your kind visit dear poet friend. I am glad you liked this. We are helpless with the spin speed of times. I am grateful to you for the blessings and good wishes. Thank you. Cheers.
Kauffman Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 11:59 AM
WOW Thriveni, you did all that in 3 minutes. There is a profoundness in your words, a sadness and a playfulness. Indeed, grandchildren bring joy but, like you said, they cannot live our joy! They will create their own childhood memories hopefully with fondness. Blessings dear poet. Best wishes for the contest.
mysore Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 9:24 PM
thank you for your kind visit dear poet. If not tied to the rhyme peg I saunter down the road freely. I am so glad to read the way you put ' they cannot live our joy'. I am grateful to you for the Blessings and Wishes. Thank you. Cheers.
Maverick Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 12:49 PM
Wow Thriveni.' I wish that although there is Truth in your lines..That God will supply your Grandchildren with grace and protection despite The worlds pressures.!
mysore Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 8:37 AM
I am grateful for your pleasant visit dear poet. your kind words brings cheer. thank you, means so much to me. Blessings & cheers.
Croft Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 8:52 AM
A beautiful 3 minute write! Have a great day writing.
mysore Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 8:36 AM
I am glad you liked it. thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Blessings & cheers.
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