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3:00am

The doors to the streets are closed. the sound of grinding has faded away A metal worker in his shop has stopped the clanging cymbal of hammer beating down on tin. both are asleep, set aside for early light. 3:00AM all tap, tap, tapping gone silent. A slight breeze kicks up dust from against a curb. A rat races off to hide And night time does it's death impersonation.

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Date: 4/18/2019 7:23:00 AM
This imagery is terrific!
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Date: 4/16/2019 11:59:00 AM
Very well done Allen. I find it hard to resist a poem entitle 3AM. This is a wonderful moment snatched from an idle city street in darkness.
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/16/2019 12:05:00 PM
hank you John
Date: 4/16/2019 9:28:00 AM
Very moody! I really enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting on mine.
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/16/2019 3:34:00 PM
Thank you Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/16/2019 7:23:00 AM
Brilliant imagery my friend, Allen!
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/16/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios

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