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2 Rose-Apple Avenue

Along Lemon Lane Down Clementine Close Round banana bend Past Persimmon Place Just down Rhubarb Road At 2 Rose-Apple Avenue You will find old Jackfruit On his blueberry bike With its watermelon wheels, Tamarind tires, And strawberry saddle. It's plum tricky to ride. But he doesn't give a fig! A Watermelon Fantasy Ride To Feed My Imagination Poetry Contest, placed 7th Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose Date wrote: 7th July 2022

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/15/2022 2:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. Sounds like a bike I had as a child. Hahaha. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Terry Miller
Date: 7/16/2022 12:49:00 AM

Thank you, Paula, I had a lot of fun writing this

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/15/2022 4:47:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me crave for fruit salad. God bless you.

Terry Miller
Date: 7/16/2022 12:50:00 AM

Hi Beata, thank you for visiting and for your kind comments.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/14/2022 11:21:00 AM

This was so creative Terry, congrats on your win, and thank you for joining my contest :)

Terry Miller
Date: 7/16/2022 12:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for the compliment, the placing, and for running the contest; it was fun!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/7/2022 9:01:00 AM

He enjoys his rig! Thanks, Terry. This was a cute, clever, delightful poem to read. Best of luck in the contest.

Terry Miller
Date: 7/7/2022 9:15:00 AM

Hi Milton, thank you; a bit of silliness, I have just edited it a little to tighten it up a bit.