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“To be or not to be: that is the question” - William Shakespeare I am ... breath-to-breath the breasted thrums a coursing quick to sear the veins molten marrow, binding beast to the neural tap-dance bloated brains borne a-back their own self-indulgent euphoric ruin. I am not ... insignificance-to-oblivion the silent pulse a chronic wound as weeps heavenly barren, black, light-and-lifeless the cold surface unrippled yet trembles, wanting a press, potential shadows push to escape ruin. Existence ... babbles like the roiling rills of sudden spring its actualization clear as mountain melt relevance and tenor balancing yet atop the point of sentience let it run to meadows ebbed and mindful to blossom full in spite of ruin. Life ... miracle precise to bear from the womb - LOVE solitary intent and pursuit of true worth the lifeblood - sacred and timeless should all and all slip the bonds a warm breath will yet sigh its wings, unseen, soar it IS all and its echo pulse immortal blessed of ruin. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Famous Poetic Lines That Inspire" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Judge & Sponsor. ~ Honorable Mention ~ in the "Brian's Choice 7, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 2/5/2020 8:49:00 AM
Greg, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful write _Constance
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 12:16:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Constance, and blessings to you, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Date: 2/3/2020 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Greg, very well deserve. Hugs eve
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 12:15:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Eve, blessings! :o) <3
Date: 2/3/2020 1:16:00 PM
Greg, this is poetic sculpture - philosophy shaped with a surgeon's knife. Your themes of heart / mind / light / dark / blood / birth / renewal all contemplated on the fulcrum of ruin form a fascinating soliloquy. Well-deserved #1, my friend. Congrats ~ John
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 12:15:00 AM
That's very kind of you, John, and I'm very pleased that you liked this one. Blessings! :o)
Date: 2/3/2020 7:17:00 AM
- Congratulations on your top win, Gregory :) - greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 12:14:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise - blessings, Friend! :o) <3
Date: 2/2/2020 11:47:00 AM
wonderful write driven with the right amount of power Greg... congratulations on your first place win
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 12:14:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Sandra, I'm pleased you liked it! :o) <3
Date: 2/2/2020 7:42:00 AM
How can one win with you at the helm, dear Greg! I love the shape of your verse! A fave, my dear friend!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 12:13:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Kim, blessings to you! :o) <3
Date: 2/2/2020 6:32:00 AM
I see the line inspired you.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 12:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend, I greatly appreciate the placement, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem! :o)

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