24 Hours N 45 Days...

24hours i'm leaving the norm.
emotions sworm.
i'm without an unbrella in the storm.

45day's i'll be n my head.
layin n my bed.
things runnin through my mind i dread.
my mind'll be fine if i have that lead.

drawing pictures of my life in my mind.
take a peek see what you find.
i'm BLIND.

in my head is where i'll be.
no1 can see.
i'm no longer free.
not the same she.

seconds past like as fast as the tortoise.
min.s flyin they're the shortest.

hours go by i watch the clock tick as my attention grows smaller.
my mom i don't even know if i can call her.
i want to go back to the party where mys and I wore fur.

i'm pourin out my heart.
n my heart there's a dart.
where do i start.

or where do i end.
my love i send.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 28, 2016 at 12:05 PM
Keeley, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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May 21, 2009 at 10:39 PM
Wow! Instead of 24/7, you give us a compelling image of 24/45 inside your head. Love what you did with the punctuation -- similar to the ee cummings style. Very nice, Keeley!
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