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i got to admit you got me this time there's something falling away from me the whispers in my ear are starting to get to me you know the way that i feel there's something broken in side my head plucking heart strings left and right six long years i was only 18 the first time i was the focus of her delight no i'm not going to stop it time to fight it will feel so right i'm not sure how but i'm going to make you pay not going to stop till i win the fight till i can hear her sob with a little spit in the eye a merciful fate i will not deny

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Date: 10/19/2010 9:31:00 AM
strong write John, enjoyed your write,..P.D..
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