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202 5

cheerful sun lovely moon swinging bruised earth anew

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/5/2025 9:21:00 AM

A very effective turn in your poem, Thriveni. As a reader, I enjoy an unexpected shift in a poem, and yours is very well done indeed. Best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/7/2025 1:38:00 AM

- New start ... 2025 ... best wishes :) - hugs

thriveni c mysore
Date: 1/7/2025 5:39:00 AM

New start it is dear poet friend. Thank you for the blessings and hugs. Happiness be yours dear friend, thank you.

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/6/2025 5:18:00 AM

May the bruises be healed Thriveni' And May God Bless your days!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 1/7/2025 5:38:00 AM

Thank you for the kind visit and blessings dear poet friend. May mother Earth's bruises be healed, Amen. You bring so much hopes, thank you.

Marilene Evans

Date: 1/5/2025 11:31:00 PM

Nicely done. The sun and the moon promise a new day, a new beginning.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 1/6/2025 2:09:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet friend. Yes Nature promises us a new beginning. Sad we take it for granted. thanks again.

David Crandall

Date: 1/5/2025 8:25:00 PM

This has a positive, hopeful ring to me. In my mind, I see the celestial father and mother of the baby new year earth, in need of care.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 1/6/2025 2:05:00 AM

'celestial father and mother' they are dear poet. I just experimented with the title, parents swinging by the child 202 wherein the five elements are kaput. Nature is too generous. your kind visit brings me joy dear friend, thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2025 8:03:00 PM

Yes earth is bruised and yet the sun and moon continue to guide us.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 1/6/2025 2:00:00 AM

Thank you dear poet, the Sun and Moon continue to guide us as you say like calm parents. your kind visit brings me joy dear friend. thank you.