2018, the Good Old Days

2018, The Good Old Days

Come 2035 and you will hear
Grandma and Grandpa in their tubular porch swing,
“Remember Iphones and lap top computers?
And telephones that vibrated and didn’t ring.

Invisible lasers are so sublime,
Turn them off or on by thinking in mime,
Call up a drink, but still must pick up,
When you’re through, just pulverize the cup.

Oh, back in those days we picked up “fast food,”
Took up so much of our time,
We even went to a grocery store,
And stood and stood in a long long iine.

Now we have printouts we just put in a box,
And a no-wait hot plate what doneness to tell,
In a shake there’s no steak for
Non-vegetarians may go to h….

Back in the day we sprinkled our own flowers,
Now solar rations soakers and sunlight 
Remember when rains came uninvited?,
Before climate control from a new tech site?

Ah, yes, the good old days before perpetual clothes,
Just pick them from a closet screen that glows,
No more beauty shops like in those old days,
Just pat our heads and think up the waves.

Remember when there weren’t clones of folk or pets,
Now we just send specs through the new sun-fed-net.
Let’s just rock and remember the good old days,
When we made our babies the old fashioned way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/4/2018 2:24:00 AM
A brilliant imagination inked in talented write. It is a pleasure to read such a profound poem. Stay bright.
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Date: 5/1/2018 12:35:00 PM
A delightful write from your very talented quill, Sunlite. My kind of poetry! Thx for your kind comments re the Solitude write and I'm honored that you consider it worthy of a fav. Best to you - Bob
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Date: 4/27/2018 12:56:00 PM
- "The Good Old Days" :))) ... yes, we have a lot to tell ... so fun :) ... - Luck in the contest, Sunlite - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/27/2018 5:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sunshine for commenting. It isn't entered in any contest, though.
Date: 4/26/2018 11:12:00 AM
Hi Sunlite, this is such a wonderful write from your golden pen. I always look back on the good old days. This is so well written. Excellent Sunlite. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/27/2018 5:46:00 PM
I love your comment. Thank you.
Date: 4/25/2018 9:07:00 AM
Ha ha, I like it. You did this so well.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/27/2018 5:45:00 PM
Richard, I'm happy you laughed. That's what I wanted.
Date: 4/23/2018 12:42:00 PM
reminiscent of aldous huxley's ( a brave new world) take about the future,sun... so disturbing yet erudite!.. huggs
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/27/2018 5:42:00 PM
I meant it for fun, Nette! I read Huxley - weird world he predicted. Thank you for dipping in. Huggs back at you.
Date: 4/23/2018 12:13:00 PM
What a fun read, Sunlite. So imaginative. A lovely and most entertaining poem.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/27/2018 5:41:00 PM
Thank you much, Line.
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