168 Empty Chairs

On the morning of April 19, 1995, Terror was heard through the Oklahoma sky. At 9:02 A.M. the explosion did occur, And the blue common day turned into a blur. A memorial was built to mark the state’s loss, Memorializing the one’s who paid terror’s cost. A monument of seats stands brightening the night, In nine rows of chairs illuminated by lights. Brokenhearted and lonely we seem to be, Silent and lonely but forever empty. Built with emotion for who we symbolize, In our bronze grain lies the pain of lost lives. Born from molted bronze, given life through death, We stand here for those who took their last breath. But from where we stand, we stand with glee, For in our sights lives the Survivor Tree. Married together in this sacred place, Imparting to those mercy and grace. When families come here to see and reflect Our memories live on as our loved ones connect. Names of young and old we proudly bear; In nine rows of 168 empty chairs. _______________________ Inspired by Deborah Guzzi’s —The Chairs Tale Contest— You can take a virtual tour at http://www.oklahomacitynationalmemorial.org
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March 26, 2010 at 4:12 AM
I don't know why I picked this poem. I am glad I did though. Great tribute to the people and the children who lost their lives- I was on the phone to a client in Oklahoma City as he dropped it, then came back on, saying he had to go. He was three blocks away and said "something terrible has happened real close to here, I'll call ya back" It still gets to me when I hear it mentioned. So bless you for this
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March 4, 2009 at 9:08 AM
Dear Rauk - Congratulations on your WIN in Deborah's contest! Peace always, John
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March 4, 2009 at 12:02 AM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Raul Rgds Brian
Jordan Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 8:44 PM
Raul what an excellent topic to use - Congratulations on placing in Deborah's contest, God Bless, MJ
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March 3, 2009 at 4:41 PM
Wonderful tribute, congrats on your placing in Debra's contest!-Always Alexandra
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March 2, 2009 at 10:58 PM
wonderful tribute! congrats ~ Arany
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March 2, 2009 at 2:10 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest, Raul! Love, Robib
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March 2, 2009 at 8:19 AM
YAY RAUL! Warmest congrats dear friend on your big win in Debbie's contest! So well deserved! Love, Shar
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March 2, 2009 at 6:58 AM
Congratulations Raul, for this poem being among the winners, and as sad a reminder this poem was...it is one event we should never forget. ~ Carrie
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February 11, 2009 at 2:42 PM
Sad theme, but great personification. I think this poem is a written memorial itself. DN
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February 3, 2009 at 11:22 PM
Beautiful write for such a horrific day...very sad indeed...touching and thoughtful dedication to those that lost their lives.. Work of art here..God bless you and keep up the excellent work*Tyesha
Martin Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 3:02 AM
The chairs are in 9 rows respresenting the 9 floors. You did this memorial justice to those who can't see it in real life. Greatness comes through each of your works. Tyler
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February 3, 2009 at 2:49 AM
You chose some nice concepts to write about. This is a constant reminder of a sad, sad day....Great work...................Danielle
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February 2, 2009 at 5:26 PM
I really love this poem, this is a very meaningful subject for many Oklahomans...................Very Nice
Neal Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 10:06 PM
Contest aside, this is a beautiful poem. I felt the terror that day. I heard the boom and felt the ground shake an hour away from the blast, excellent poem, We won't forget that day. Love Elizabeth
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February 1, 2009 at 2:58 PM
Excellent write here, Raul and I believe the only tribute to the Oklahoma bombing that I've seen on this site. In 1977 I lived in downtown Oklahoma City right where urban renewal began and they were just tearing down old buildings to renovate the area. I thouht the "city" under the city was awesome. Your write has brought back a lot of memories.
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February 1, 2009 at 12:32 AM
Best wishes with this one Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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February 1, 2009 at 12:27 AM
Nicely penned, The true site alone is breath taking. You did this memorial justice.
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January 31, 2009 at 9:54 AM
A sad tribute, and what did it gain? When will people learn? Thanks for remembering and honor those that were unjustly killed, Ron
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January 31, 2009 at 6:54 AM
An incredible, thoughtful and touching dedication for such a senseless tragedy. I am going to check out that site. Thank you Raul. Check your soup mail. Love, Shar
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January 31, 2009 at 2:46 AM
Suich a sad day for the country, beautiful poem, Raul, love, Kristin
Kelly Avatar
January 30, 2009 at 11:59 PM
Great piece , and a great tribute , Raul ....
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January 30, 2009 at 7:13 PM
Wonderful job Raul..I love the use of the empty chairs. You are so talented. BG
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January 30, 2009 at 5:34 PM
So touching a tribute, and sad reminder. Well done, Raul. ~ Carrie
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January 30, 2009 at 5:19 PM
What a heartfelt poem. Nice way to honor those who lost so much. Good luck in the contest. This one is a winner is my eyes. Blessings to you. Karen
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