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128 Words- Love Is In Bloom

You are my soul, you make me whole. My heart is yours, this love is ours. Kiss me my dear, while I’m so near. You are my sun, we have much fun. Don’t waste a day, night is at bay. Love is in bloom, so make some room. I am not sad, or mad, just glad. Pain is no more, now love can soar. To have and hold, when it is cold. I am now free, to just be me. Days are so right, and so is night. My one true love, we fit like glove. Let us just dance, and take a chance. I like your style, I’d walk a mile. Your love brought hope, I can now cope. Gloom left the room, let's jump the broom. 1-31-18 Contest: 128 words Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 2/15/2018 10:41:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Alexis - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/6/2018 8:21:00 PM
An very endearing and romantic poem Alexis, beautifully written. Enjoyed! Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~Susan
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Date: 2/6/2018 5:01:00 AM
Alexis, back to say congrats. John
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Date: 2/4/2018 7:26:00 PM
Congrats on your fine winning poem Alexis!~Che :)
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Date: 2/4/2018 7:23:00 PM
Beautifully written and very romantic, Alexis. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/5/2018 8:39:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
Date: 2/4/2018 6:33:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Alexis.
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Date: 2/4/2018 3:53:00 PM
Very sweet and romantic Alexis.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/5/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Silent. I appreciate my placement in your contest :-) Alexis
Date: 2/3/2018 12:13:00 PM
Well done, Alexis.
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Date: 2/1/2018 3:28:00 PM
Alexis, I enjoyed this, nicely done. Best of luck. John
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Date: 2/1/2018 2:58:00 PM
- .... a pleasure to read ... a lovely poem, Alexis - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/1/2018 1:36:00 PM
I love your flow and attitude throughout this challenge. This was so enthralling and entertaining, I thought it couldn't get any better, but it leaped over better with that last line. Bravo, Alexis! Blessings ... CayCay
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Date: 2/1/2018 10:33:00 AM
You made great use of your 128 words.
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Date: 2/1/2018 10:09:00 AM
A beautiful romantic write Alexis ...GL in the contest...
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Date: 1/31/2018 9:40:00 PM
Wonderful , Alexis, enjoyed reading ..luck in the contest
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Date: 1/31/2018 8:13:00 PM
A very sweet endearing awesome write Alexis; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 1/31/2018 5:51:00 PM
Ahh, it's so sweet, Alexis. I hope I can hurry and pull this one off. You even have killed two birds with one stone possibly. This works as a valentine poem!
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Date: 1/31/2018 5:01:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem. You did an excellent job of keeping the flow and the story-line going..well done Alexis..best for a win.
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Date: 1/31/2018 4:52:00 PM
This is an excellent entry for the contest and a great Valentine poem too Alexis! I am sure to see this on the winner's list! : )
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