12-18-2018 Monoku

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Contest entry. First time with the Monoku form.

an old movie a reel resurrection winding by 12-18-2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2018 7:10:00 PM

You did "reely" great for first one. Loved your word play!!

Silent One

Date: 12/21/2018 9:46:00 AM

Oh, I meant for future poem in my contest.. That must have come across as a bit bossy! Lol.. sorry David.

David Drowley
Date: 12/21/2018 11:29:00 AM

Sorry about the question marks. They were substituted in for a thumbs up emoticon.

David Drowley
Date: 12/21/2018 11:28:00 AM

No problem. Keeping contest integrity is important!?? Keep those contests coming.

Silent One

Date: 12/20/2018 12:34:00 PM

Oh, sorry, now I see it. If you put it on the botton of the one liner please.

David Drowley
Date: 12/20/2018 1:20:00 PM

Silent One, I have placed the date of the poem just below the Monoku. Thank you for requesting the change. David Drowley

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/20/2018 7:18:00 AM

- A wonderful "one liner" - Congratulations, David :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/20/2018 7:00:00 AM

Hi David, I enjoy the classics. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Silent One

Date: 12/20/2018 5:37:00 AM

This was very good, it would have probably finished first place.. However, you did not follow all the instructions of the contest guidelines, which asked for poems to be dated.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

David Drowley
Date: 12/20/2018 9:19:00 AM

Sorry I misunderstood where the date belonged. It was in the title.

Sand Blown

Date: 12/18/2018 5:41:00 PM

nice write...old films are neat in the sense they are a cacophony of images our minde must string together...unlike digital discs