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FOR HAIBUN CONTEST

 

1140 Royal Street

The first time I met Madame La Laurie, was in 1832 When she and her third husband (Dr. Louis La Laurie) purchased me. My first impression of Madame La Laurie was that she was soft spoken, of fine breeding, and very beautiful.  

Upon her arrival, she wasted no time filling every nook and cranny at 1140 Royal Street with the finest furniture and china that money could buy. No one looking at the  plain exterior of this house, would ever expect such opulence within it walls.

She wore the latest fashions from Paris with a flare beyond rival, even by the most inducted social lights of the hour, which did not go unnoticed.  Both men and women, would stop in their tracks to gaze upon this regal beauty as she strolled down the main streets of New Orleans.

Soon, with the aide of her husbands connections through his practise, she, gained  acceptance into the higher circles of the community and began hosting what would become, the most sought after dinner invitations in all of New Orleans.

This was the one side of Madame La Laurie that the world saw, but it was I, who bore witness to the other side. NEVER could anyone have ever imagined the atrocities this women committed in her chamber of horrors on the 3rd floor as she maimed, tortured and  murdered any slave that displeased her. 

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I was burned badly, when one slave, wanting to end his misery, set a fire in the kitchen, finally bringing her reign of terror to and end, where upon she  fled in her hell driven carriage, into the night, never to be seen again. 

Today, I stand here at 1140 Royal street, completely unrecognizable. I have a different face now. The only thing left one would recognize from that day, would be the old path that runs between me and the adjacent house.  

Lush green foliage now grows along its edge, in what I like to think, a remembrance to the tortured souls who died here.

Between these brick walls
Bright light filters from above
Old seeds bloom again

BUT...IF YOU DARE to walk between these walls, you...like me, THAT OLD HOUSE IN NEW ORLEANS, might see the apparitions of the tortured souls still residing there.

                                                ~~~


Poetry form: Haibun

For the contest, A House In New Orleans, sponsor, Lin Lane

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Makama Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:08 AM
A wonder and a bliss, your lines have given my heart a kiss and I am glad on your page, I did not suffer a miss. An outright 7 dear colleague
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Awe, Elaine, I finally get to thank you while you are online. You are sweet. Always ~LINDA~
George   Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:03 AM
When the time is right, I know you will do it. I will be first in line.
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:40 AM
Elaine, I wish I knew where to start. Many poets want to know if I have a book. I don't. I like the idea. Good night sweet lady. LINDA
George   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:17 AM
Thank you, Linda. I hope you will one day produce a book with all these wonderful creative writings. What a gem that would be!!!
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 12:41 AM
Wonderful win, Elaine....LINDA
George   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:07 AM
Thank you, Linda.
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February 1, 2016 at 10:50 AM
I know that I commented on this one but my comment is not here..I know that I did because I remember this one because it shocked me..Great story..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
George   Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 1:58 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Sara...and for your comments. Much appreciated.
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January 31, 2016 at 8:25 PM
Whoa! What a story! Expertly crafted with an eye for detail and rich in imagery. Well done Elaine! Best wishes, Keith
George   Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Thank you Keith. I just couldn't resist the subject matter of that contest. It was such fun writing this.
Inman Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Beautiful story, Elaine. Very imaginative and well written. Looks like a bit of research went into this as well.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:54 PM
Exquisite poetry Elaine.. congrats on great win!
George   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:58 PM
Thank you dear, Upma.
Gentry Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:51 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest with this outstanding portrayal.
George   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:18 PM
Thank you for stopping by Susan and for your comments. Much appreciated.
Lane Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish in my contest, Elaine. Thank you very much for writing for me.
George   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:17 PM
Thank you, Lin. My Pleasure
Anish Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 8:25 PM
What a scary tale you tell here! Very vivid description! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
George   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Thank you, Matthew, for stopping by and for your comments.
Babcock Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Enjoyed this tale Elaine.Your work is always exceptional. love phyl
Horsman Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:54 AM
This is a classic Elaine, just love the story.
George   Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments, Harry. New Orleans has some incredible history.
Vaso Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 12:22 AM
I really enjoyed this, I love poetic stories such as this! Even evil ones!! :)
George   Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 2:14 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Arthur, and for your comments. Much appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 6:21 PM
oohhhh, I am glad I came to see this one. Love seeing your Stephen King side come out!! I take it this is a true thing? Gotta go check out that history!!
George   Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 11:47 AM
yes! Andrea. It is true! Thanks for stopping by.
Johnson Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 12:08 AM
i just received a friend request on facebook ....was it you:}....so many scammers wanting this entry.... Love your Haibun, Elaine...
George   Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 1:32 AM
Yes! Don It was me. Just starting to get into facebook. Thank you for stopping by and reading my Haibun.
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