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10 Lines, 5 Words

Unending was our life’s revelry That lifted voyages, so merry And charmed whispers ever said Still chime so gently overhead: Yet midnight called your name ; To embrace time’s holy flame. ~ Until that one last remembrance My being started to dance… Love resides through heavenly sky Without need to echo goodbye. Contest: 10 Lines, 5 Words: Rhyme Sponsored by Laura Loo 12/30/2017 Couplet Rhyme Form

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Date: 1/3/2018 3:53:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/1/2018 7:56:00 PM
Just when you think nothing more can be said, Along Comes Nette! Congratulations
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Date: 1/1/2018 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nette! Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/31/2017 11:15:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette on you win with a beautiful poem. Happy New Year.
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Date: 12/31/2017 10:10:00 PM
Lovely, exuberant piece, Nette. Congrats and happy New Year! Janice
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Date: 12/31/2017 9:06:00 PM
Back with congratulations for your win with your lovely write Nette. ~Susan
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Date: 12/31/2017 8:42:00 PM
Lovely memories, Nette! Congrats!
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Date: 12/31/2017 8:30:00 PM
so beautiful sweet Nette! I fell in love right away, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 12/30/2017 8:03:00 PM
Sadly beautiful enchanted love. Elegant and serene Nette.
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Date: 12/30/2017 9:30:00 AM
Just beautiful, Nette! And so are you. May the new year meet you and keep you with blessings! Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 12/30/2017 8:55:00 AM
You did this very well Nette... Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 12/30/2017 7:32:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem, nette--your verses are elegant and beautiful.
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Date: 12/30/2017 6:59:00 AM
Incredible way to depict a love everlasting! Priceless work and happy wishes for New Year
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Date: 12/30/2017 6:44:00 AM
You said it here,"Love resides through heavenly sky Without need to echo goodbye." Regardless...All the best to you and your, Nette
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Date: 12/30/2017 4:44:00 AM
Nice poem on love, Nette:)
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