Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

10 Lines, 5 Words

Unending was our life’s revelry
That  lifted  voyages, so merry
And  charmed whispers ever said 
Still chime so gently overhead:
Yet   midnight called your name ;
To  embrace time’s  holy flame.

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Until  that one last remembrance
My being started to dance…
Love resides through heavenly  sky
Without need to  echo  goodbye.



Contest: 10 Lines, 5 Words: Rhyme
Sponsored by Laura Loo 12/30/2017
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Line Gauthier January 3, 2018 at 3:53 PM I enjoyed your poem, nette. Congrats on your win.

Judy Konos January 1, 2018 at 7:56 PM Just when you think nothing more can be said, Along Comes Nette! Congratulations

Eve Roper January 1, 2018 at 7:13 AM Congratulations on your win, Nette! Hugs Eve

Subimal Sinha-Roy December 31, 2017 at 11:15 PM Congratulations, Nette on you win with a beautiful poem. Happy New Year.

Janice Canerdy December 31, 2017 at 10:10 PM Lovely, exuberant piece, Nette. Congrats and happy New Year! Janice

Susan Ashley December 31, 2017 at 9:06 PM Back with congratulations for your win with your lovely write Nette. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues December 31, 2017 at 8:42 PM Lovely memories, Nette! Congrats!

Beautiful Scars December 31, 2017 at 8:30 PM so beautiful sweet Nette! I fell in love right away, thank you and congrats :)-luloo

Susan Ashley December 30, 2017 at 8:03 PM Sadly beautiful enchanted love. Elegant and serene Nette.

CayCay Godwin December 30, 2017 at 9:30 AM Just beautiful, Nette! And so are you. May the new year meet you and keep you with blessings! Hugs ... CayCay

Silent One December 30, 2017 at 8:55 AM You did this very well Nette... Good luck in the contest..

Vijay Pandit December 30, 2017 at 7:32 AM I enjoyed reading your poem, nette--your verses are elegant and beautiful.

Lyva Marty December 30, 2017 at 6:59 AM Incredible way to depict a love everlasting! Priceless work and happy wishes for New Year

Arturo Michael December 30, 2017 at 6:44 AM You said it here,"Love resides through heavenly sky Without need to echo goodbye." Regardless...All the best to you and your, Nette

Joanna Daniel December 30, 2017 at 4:44 AM Nice poem on love, Nette:)