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1-15-10 Look Into My Eyes

i caught your eyes on me. dont bother to look away. ive already noticed. i wish i was brave enough to stare back. it doesnt bother me, just makes me curious. what are you thinking? or are you just observing? try to figure me out. but you wont. because youve only met the imposter. you havent stopped to look into my eyes.

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Gypse Summers

Date: 1/21/2010 1:32:00 PM

whatsbehind anyones eyes is a mystery indeed great writting

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 1/19/2010 10:20:00 AM

hmm. some fonts didn't come over, but... you get the message. :) Your writing is wonderful. so are you eYes.

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 1/19/2010 10:18:00 AM

;) wink et blink... can you be so sure mon amour? ? a??p? µ?? il mio amore mi amor meine Liebe meu amor ... ;)~

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/17/2010 2:05:00 PM

Narrative form I think? Interesting write! Light & Love

G G

Date: 1/15/2010 3:51:00 PM

i like it!!!

Robert Stevens

Date: 1/15/2010 12:44:00 PM

Great poem Rain. I think about how people look at me and think what the hell are they thinking, feel like saying just say hello to me and get to know me for a minute and stop looking at the cover. Read the book. Great poem.