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03-02-2011

Stormy sea sailing... high heavens hold humid heat tremendous thunder. For "Alliterative Haiku" contest sponsored by Chris D. Aechtner.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2011 6:43:00 AM

I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read George. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2011 4:16:00 PM

Awesome view in your words George and a great contest entry.. much success my friend.. great Alliteration in your lines ..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/2/2011 4:06:00 PM

Those thunderheads build up so quickly over the warm seas, George. As a fishing fan, this holds special meaning for me. It's hard not to get caught in the storms. Great use of alliteration. Wishing you success in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/2/2011 2:49:00 PM

beautiful alliteration penned so well, Aul. Good luck in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2011 2:03:00 PM

Sounds like a royal storm is on its way. GREAT one, George!

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/2/2011 1:35:00 PM

powerful haiku, best of luck in the contest