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Stormy sea sailing... high heavens hold humid heat tremendous thunder. For "Alliterative Haiku" contest sponsored by Chris D. Aechtner.

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Date: 3/3/2011 6:43:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read George. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2011 4:16:00 PM
Awesome view in your words George and a great contest entry.. much success my friend.. great Alliteration in your lines ..
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Date: 3/2/2011 4:06:00 PM
Those thunderheads build up so quickly over the warm seas, George. As a fishing fan, this holds special meaning for me. It's hard not to get caught in the storms. Great use of alliteration. Wishing you success in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/2/2011 2:49:00 PM
beautiful alliteration penned so well, Aul. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 3/2/2011 2:03:00 PM
Sounds like a royal storm is on its way. GREAT one, George!
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Date: 3/2/2011 1:35:00 PM
powerful haiku, best of luck in the contest
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