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Insistent starkness claims a leafless day As morning breaks with quiet brown and dread A window frames a fallen tree, displayed, with jagged edge, A severed crown that rests upon the clay The scene inside, imparts a brooding air A room is sparce, without a chair, but hint of hushed despair Desolation is framed and trapped by winter's glass, instead Simplicity and loneliness finds a table set for one Will someone there alone break bread again to a pensive dawning view? The early angled sun casts shadows deep and long A masquerade of warmth, imparts a deeply chilling flame A melancholy mood reflects of Andrew Wyeth fame Upon the wall, a garden grew, with flowers wild and free Today a faded yellow memory, of how it used to be Where once were two, has now dissolved, denied of greener days Now holds a room of solitude and a table set for one And a chill through window glass will crack, a lonely, winter song
------------------------------------------------------------- Inspired by Andrew Wyeth's Painting "Groundhog Day" http://www.andrew-wyeth-prints.com/gallery.html

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/9/2013 7:55:00 PM
A cool win Carrie,... enjoyed every entry on the winning list... congratulations in "The Highlander contest" ~ SKAT
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Date: 8/8/2013 10:09:00 PM
Hi Carrie, another awesome win...Linda
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:33:00 PM
awesome win nate
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:38:00 AM
Another favorite artist...he did project such loging aye? Congrad's on your well deserved win. ( line 2 is perfection!oh and 5 & too many LOL)
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Date: 6/9/2010 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Picture This" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2010 8:58:00 PM
well there you go again, Carrie. another awesome win. Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/7/2010 12:25:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Picture This .. with another fantastic write.. and perfect print to choose.. glorious victory today.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/7/2010 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your third place, dear Carrie. Wonderful Ekphrasis.
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Date: 6/1/2010 8:26:00 AM
Trapped inside a room. Great poem. Making of a person's world a room is a favorite subject of mine too. Ah, but there is a certain protection felt inside a room, though lonely. Love,daver
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Date: 5/31/2010 6:25:00 PM
REALLY DISCRIPTIVE AND A VERY GOOD POEM GR8 JOB!
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Date: 5/31/2010 2:30:00 PM
very well descript of that picture carrie this should do very well in contest also thanks for your kind comments to my work and for birthday greetings keep up the wonderful writing
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Date: 5/31/2010 11:24:00 AM
Nicely done Carrie. A true Ekphrasis worthy of high ranking in the contest. Funny thing is I couldn't find a web site that could show me anything more than a very small image of this painting - due to copywrite restrictions. But, your words helped me interpret what little I could see. Joe
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Date: 5/30/2010 9:06:00 AM
Oh, I LOVE Wyeth, Carrie, and you did a superb job putting words to his painting. Have you seen Wyeth's "Christina's World"? We saw a print in a store when I was just 10 years old. Couldn't stop staring at it so my mother bought it for my bedroom. Your poem should do quite well in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:11:00 AM
Very Well written... love the scene it puts in my head.. love Michael
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:06:00 AM
Great write...I have not viewed the contest so I don't know exactly what you are talking about but it is a very descriptive write...Keep the creative pen flowing...Good luck in the contest...Sara
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:45:00 AM
Beautifully written, Carrie! Amazing use of imagery! Loved to read your poem today and it reminds me of my own life now. Have a great time and best wishes for the contest...Love, Gert
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Date: 5/30/2010 12:46:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/29/2010 8:21:00 PM
A nice entry in the contest. Good luck, Carrie
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:25:00 PM
oh, my, this is breathtakingly beautiful. I see yet another top honor in this one! I am thinking maybe I should have written Ahhh instead of Awww as you did in your comment to me in one of my lines about the panda. I better check a dictionary or something. haha. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/29/2010 6:11:00 PM
Carrie, wonderful poem beautifully written - Very lonely feeling to it - Carrie thank you for your comments and support, your friendship is very treasured - YF4L, God Bless, mj
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Date: 5/29/2010 5:46:00 PM
well written,truely enjoyed,best wishes on the contest and hope you have a wonderful memorial day weekend
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Date: 5/29/2010 3:08:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful.
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