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-love until-

i shall shower you with stars cascading,
          encompass you with cosmic moon dust-
          enraptured in intimacy, never lust;
the eventide ascends with sun fading,
as the Praying Mantis bends serenading-
          for we have a foundation built on trust-
you can detain my riches, no persuading
          I adore you, sweet...for our love is just

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Date written - November 8, 2019
Sponsor - Tania Kitchin
Contest - Give Me 8 Lines of Rhyme


Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/13/2019 6:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Lu Loo.
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Date: 11/13/2019 5:05:00 AM
Lu Loo, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet romantic poem!
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Date: 11/8/2019 1:56:00 PM
A wonderful and well-composed poem.
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Date: 11/8/2019 7:25:00 AM
A beautiful love poem that touches the heart. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 11/8/2019 6:16:00 AM
Another awesome write. I love this one too. Blessings sweet lady, Gina
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