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-love until-

i shall shower you with stars cascading, encompass you with cosmic moon dust- enraptured in intimacy, never lust; the eventide ascends with sun fading, as the Praying Mantis bends serenading- for we have a foundation built on trust- you can detain my riches, no persuading I adore you, sweet...for our love is just ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Date written - November 8, 2019 Sponsor - Tania Kitchin Contest - Give Me 8 Lines of Rhyme

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Date: 11/13/2019 6:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Lu Loo.
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Date: 11/13/2019 5:05:00 AM
Lu Loo, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet romantic poem!
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Date: 11/8/2019 1:56:00 PM
A wonderful and well-composed poem.
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Date: 11/8/2019 7:25:00 AM
A beautiful love poem that touches the heart. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 11/8/2019 6:16:00 AM
Another awesome write. I love this one too. Blessings sweet lady, Gina
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