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a little naughty...yet- true  ;-)

you send  r e s o n a t i n g  chills down my spine-
thank
God
you
are
MINE…

one kiss on my nape, I fall onto my knees,
       o, how I pray this crimson love shan’t cease-
you tickle my waist and I start to tease,
       don’t ever stop, my love- I beg you- PLEASE

       those resonating goosebumps make me weak,
I start to undress, and you sneak a peek;
       I adore your evocative technique,
it’s given me the pleasure I did seek

skin crawling from intimacy with desire,
       for you ignite an incandescent fire-
a plethora of touches I require,
       you adore me wearing flirty attire

       shivers under soft satin sheets do spark,
this romance we embrace I did embark-
       for you glance, I blush; dancing in the dark;
love, come whisper that sensual remark

my beloved- 
       ebullient stardust falls when we entwine,
for God made us His most perfect design;
       YOU SEND RESONATING CHILLS DOWN MY SPINE,
all from one touch from a man so divine
       and, 
my love-
       I thank God you are MINE

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Date - November 8, 2019
Contest - Goosebumps
Sponsor -  Delilah Ventura

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/9/2019 12:53:00 AM
Wow that's powerful! Loved it! As always my dear friend your writing is something special!;)
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2019 1:30:00 PM
thank you BB- check your soupie :) (very important and time sensitive) Be blessed and thanks again! x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/8/2019 7:56:00 PM
wow, what a way to do GOOSEBUMPS, Shiver me timbers. This is awesome. (thanks for my win in your contest. I am so happy you liked it)
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:29:00 PM
that's hilarious! Shiver me timbers! WOW I haven't heard that phrase in years. You are the best sweet Andrea. Thank you! x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/8/2019 11:39:00 AM
WOW! this one belongs in a book and not just any book maybe in between Mark and Matthew! So, so well done Lu Loo!! If this doesn't win 1st place I give up! So much love in this poem!!
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2019 1:28:00 PM
your silly, but thank you for the compliment. I was hoping to give people chills with this nonfictional poem. Finally I was able to write freely about my passion for my hubby. Maybe too passionate? Who knows, at least I tried is what I say! many thanks dear Bobby x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/8/2019 7:31:00 AM
Wow! Very provocative write Lu Loo; you just gave me the chills. ;)
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2019 1:27:00 PM
that's what I hoped for! thank you x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/8/2019 6:15:00 AM
This is just amazing, so intimate and passionate. I love it. God bless with love and prayers, Gina
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2019 1:27:00 PM
thank you sweet RR! Blessings x:-)-luloo