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-for You Are Mine-

you send r e s o n a t i n g chills down my spine- thank God you are MINE… one kiss on my nape, I fall onto my knees, o, how I pray this crimson love shan’t cease- you tickle my waist and I start to tease, don’t ever stop, my love- I beg you- PLEASE those resonating goosebumps make me weak, I start to undress, and you sneak a peek; I adore your evocative technique, it’s given me the pleasure I did seek skin crawling from intimacy with desire, for you ignite an incandescent fire- a plethora of touches I require, you adore me wearing flirty attire shivers under soft satin sheets do spark, this romance we embrace I did embark- for you glance, I blush; dancing in the dark; love, come whisper that sensual remark my beloved- ebullient stardust falls when we entwine, for God made us His most perfect design; YOU SEND RESONATING CHILLS DOWN MY SPINE, all from one touch from a man so divine and, my love- I thank God you are MINE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Date - November 8, 2019

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/9/2019 12:53:00 AM

Wow that's powerful! Loved it! As always my dear friend your writing is something special!;)

Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2019 1:30:00 PM

thank you BB- check your soupie :) (very important and time sensitive) Be blessed and thanks again! x:-)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2019 7:56:00 PM

wow, what a way to do GOOSEBUMPS, Shiver me timbers. This is awesome. (thanks for my win in your contest. I am so happy you liked it)

Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2019 1:29:00 PM

that's hilarious! Shiver me timbers! WOW I haven't heard that phrase in years. You are the best sweet Andrea. Thank you! x:-)-luloo

Bobby May

Date: 11/8/2019 11:39:00 AM

WOW! this one belongs in a book and not just any book maybe in between Mark and Matthew! So, so well done Lu Loo!! If this doesn't win 1st place I give up! So much love in this poem!!

Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2019 1:28:00 PM

your silly, but thank you for the compliment. I was hoping to give people chills with this nonfictional poem. Finally I was able to write freely about my passion for my hubby. Maybe too passionate? Who knows, at least I tried is what I say! many thanks dear Bobby x:-)-luloo

Phil Capitano

Date: 11/8/2019 7:31:00 AM

Wow! Very provocative write Lu Loo; you just gave me the chills. ;)

Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2019 1:27:00 PM

that's what I hoped for! thank you x:-)-luloo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/8/2019 6:15:00 AM

This is just amazing, so intimate and passionate. I love it. God bless with love and prayers, Gina

Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2019 1:27:00 PM

thank you sweet RR! Blessings x:-)-luloo